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NO MORE FAILURE

Starring

MUSCLE MARINE:

I turn around to face you, as the black bitch keeps screaming from the pain I just finished administering to him. And stepping towards you, I bend down over you and snap a tight hold of your nape, my fingers squeezing tightly in a vice claw, and start lifting you up to your feet. “We are going home. I will deal with you in a more private setting.” As I point to the cameras installed all around the gym hall, flickering. Dragging you across the huge space to the parking, and shove you into my 4x4, it is almost as if I am dealing with a dead body, barely fighting back, still in shock.

Arriving back to my loft, atop a new high-rise at the edge of the city, I throw you off my shoulder and onto a massive couch in the middle of the open space, as I step out of the private elevator. “You will have some explaining to do… in a bit.” As I disappear up the stairs to my bedroom where I take a quick shower and change into something a bit more comfortable, before joining you again downstairs. I sit across from you in a pair of loose gym shorts and tank top, my legs wide open in a brazen display of manliness, knowing it will stimulate you and turn you on.

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DREAM BREAKER:

Little by little, I am finally coming back to my senses after all what just happened. Not only the physical damage I received from that black bitch but also the stressful situation caused by seeing you fighting with Dan was just too much. And I admit, the shame, the shame that you caught me there even though I had promised not to interfere, and the shame of finding me there, in a helpless state, wounded and humiliated as Dan didn't have a scratch on him. My male credibility took a severe blow.

And now I was sitting here, in front of you ready to receive more. I stare at your face and, I admit it, your bulging crotch between your wide spread open legs as I swallow deep and slowly I return my gaze to your eyes. "You must be mad at me, Max. I am so sorry. I should have listened to you".

I struggle to get up from the sofa and go to the open kitchen to get a wet towel. Wiping my bloody face and clean the worst of the stains I return back to the sofa in front of you. "No, Max. I know I deserve what ever you're going to do. I'm really sorry, but I couldn't help myself, I had to try something."

MUSCLE MARINE:

I sit on the single couch, all the time silent. I just watch you walk around, clean yourself and come back to sit on the huge couch. I don't say a word and you feel the tension rising in the whole loft. I keep listening to you reasoning, trying to convince me more.

DREAM BREAKER:

The silence is freezing. It's like a sharp knife cutting deep. I look into your serious eyes, which pierce my soul. I know that look, I've seen it before. It doesn't mean anything good. "Max, I know I lied to you and did the exact opposite of what you told me to do, but you have to understand that I couldn't just stand there and watch what that fucking bitch was doing to you. I just couldn't accept it, do you understand?" I wait for your reaction, but you remain silent and stare at me. "Max, I had to do it, even though I knew it could cost me my life. And you were right, you saved me at the last minute."

MUSCLE MARINE:

I keep ignoring you, sitting on the couch, legs spread, just looking at you as you walk around then sit, then walk around again, still deep in your monologue. I move my hand to my thigh and rub it, right next to my crotch. You can see the outline of my cock as it plumps slowly in my shorts. My silence is adding more pressure and tension to the whole situation as the air becomes thicker and heavier in the room. I can feel you starting to become uncomfortable, getting you worked up. I can feel you jittery and annoyed now.

DREAM BREAKER:

My nervousness starts to show in my voice, I almost stutter as I stare at the bulge growing between your legs. I swallow deeply as I follow the outline of your cock with my gaze, its tempting movements as it almost wants to break the thin fabric of your briefs. But you keep quiet, not pronouncing a word just staring me and spreading your legs more open. "Is that what you want?", I ask myself as I get off the couch and walk in front of you, eventually squatting down on my knees between your legs and raising my eyes to your face as if seeking permission.

MUSCLE MARINE:

I still don't answer you and that drives you crazy, unsure of what to do. You might touch me and I could snap; you might not touch and I could get angry. I can see the lost look on your face, the mixed feeling of anxiety and excitement confusing you. I keep staring at you, deep into your eyes. Deep down I want to rip you apart, destroy you, break you, turn you into a whimpering bitch, and at the same time I want to hug you, kiss you and worship your bigger body, thanking you for being a true friend and trying. But I first want to teach you a lesson... one you will never forget.

DREAM BREAKER: 

I am confused. I thought I know you very well and yet this is something I have never seen in you before. I am hesitating to proceed, don´t know how should I move on. I place my face against your bulge, feeling your giant cock against my cheek as my eyes are nailed on yours trying to find any change in them, any expression on your face that could show me what to do. "Max, what can I do to make you forgive me? Tell me, will I do anything?"

MUSCLE MARINE:

As you get closer to my bulge, your head right between my thighs, I snap them shut instantly around your neck, and locking my legs behind you. "Forgive you? What is there to forgive after I clearly asked you to stay away from DAN..." I start squeezing tighter and tighter. That is when a smile breaks on my face as I start to see you choke, and in no time, you are pounding your fists on my rippling flexing quads.

DREAM BREAKER:

And there it comes, the reaction I was waiting for. All of the sudden you make me choke, my face buried into your hard crotch cutting my airflow almost completely. I inhale the scent of your masculinity that has always turned me on, and it´s not an exception now either. This is crazy, I am aroused, horny as hell but at the same time struggling to stay conscious. "MAX.. FUCK.. LET ME BREATH"., I mumble against your stiff cock as I pound my fists on your quads trying to force you to open your thighs and let my head free from your grip.

MUSCLE MARINE:

When I can feel you starting to weaken, I release my hold, and open my legs wide. But I waste no time, and snap grab you by the neck tight... forcing you back and up to your feet. I start dragging you backwards to the massive couch behind you and make you drop on it. I lift a foot and slam it hard to your gut, grinding my heel in your softened belly, before you have time to flex it tight. "You deliberately went against me. I asked you not to engage. What were you thinking? You had a death wish?" I lift a foot and slam it hard again into your gut. "He could have killed you... and for what? You didn't even land one hit on him... Pathetic." I pull my foot off you, reach down and snap grab you by the balls tight, almost crushing them.

DREAM BREAKER:

Your blows to my stomach and gut twist my body in pain, my balls are almost crushed in your tight grip, which makes my body writhe and twitch in pain, but that's not what hurts me the most. What really hurts me are your words. Especially when I know they're true. I was pathetic in my attempt to face Dan, crushed before I could land a single blow, and on top of that, you had to save me from certain death. "Max, you're right. I've lost face as a man, I've let you down as a partner and a friend, and I understand if you don't want to hear from me anymore. I betrayed your trust and destroyed my reputation as a fighter. I deserve my punishment," I say in a quiet, low voice, trying to stay on my feet as you squeeze my balls even tighter.

But what shows no signs of submission is the hard cock between my legs, which is forming a huge tent in the front of my sweater shorts. "Max, what can I do to make you forgive me?"

MUSCLE MARINE:

I look down now, straight into your eyes, and suddenly my stoic face breaks with an evil smile. "What you can do?" I suddenly feel you tense beneath me, with my grip still on your nuts. I tug on them and start to pull you off the couch to a standing position.

You are taller than me, and I have to look up but you still look pathetic and whimpering with me crushing your balls. I slowly let go of your balls and pull back two steps and take a stance. "You had a death wish? I will gladly grant it to you." I smile then laugh... "The MM way..." and before you can react, I jump and round house kick you in the head, making you land again onto the couch, only face down this time.

DREAM BREAKER:

Your facial expression finally changes when you smile but that smile doesn't promise any good. I realize I'm right when your kick hits me in the head and sends me face-first back to the couch. "The MM way..," you say. Something tells me I'm going to remember this "The MM way" for a long time. I try to get up on my knees from the couch while my head turns back to see you. "Max, what are you up to?"

MUSCLE MARINE: 

But I step towards you, lift a leg and axe kick you down again. As you slam down to the couch, I bring my foot to your nape and step on it, pinning you down hard. "You are not going anywhere." As I bend a bit behind you and grab your hips, pulling them up a bit, making your body arch in a downward shape on the couch. I smack your ass hard. "You will pay for what you did... the risk you took..."

DREAM BREAKER:

Feeling the leathery scent of the sofa as you press my face against it, you firmly lift my hips upwards while I feel your palm slap my buttocks hard. But I don´t even try to struggle back. "Max, I just couldn't help but get involved. What he did to you ... I just couldn't let it go, you must understand that?", I mumble against the sofa, fearing the worst.

MUSCLE MARINE:

And your words are cut short when I slide my hand over your ass and slide my middle finger into your hole and hook it inside.

DREAM BREAKER:

 My body stiffens as I feel your finger suddenly entering into my ass. But at the same time something inside me calms down..it´s you.. I trust you.. "Max.. fuck.. what are you going to do?", I keep mumbling against the sofa.

MUSCLE MARINE:

 "I am going to fuck you. Isn't that what you want?" As I wiggle my finger deeper, faster, and suddenly slide in another one into your ass.


DREAM BREAKER:

I manage to turn my face to one side and breath fresh air finally as I watch you from the corner of my eye behind my ass. I moan quietly as I feel your second finger entering into my ass. I love it. We have done it many times before.. BUT, I have my doubts, something is telling me you have other ideas in your mind and knowing you I won´t perhaps like it too much.

MUSCLE MARINE:

"I am going to do to you what I was going to do to that fucking DAN had he resisted a bit more." As I slide yet another finger into your ass, bring all three together and continue pumping them in and out. I swirl them in a spoon form inside your ass. "I am going to core you out."

DREAM BREAKER:

I start sweating hearing your words. I know you could perfectly do all that, destroy my ass, perhaps even fist fuck me. "Max, please , try to understand me. I did it for you.. don´t you see?!", I'm trying to talk some sense into you. "You don´t need to do that", I scream feeling you spooning your fingers inside my narrow canal. My cock is enjoying the scene though, damn betrayer, starting dripping precum onto the leather upholstery of the sofa.

MUSCLE MARINE:

I step on your nape harder and insert a fourth finger... and now you now things are not looking good anymore. No mercy is shown. "And I need to do this too. Need to make you understand, and pay." And before you can react, I push the last digit of my hand into you, forming a fist inside your ass. I hold it a bit inside, just enough to get you to adapt to the pain. I can feel your muscles tensing, your ass trying to clench tight. And most of all, my other hand slides under you and feels your cock getting hard and leaking. I laugh, mocking you.

DREAM BREAKER:

I turn my face back against of the sofa to silence my agonized roar as I feel your fist penetrating my insides. You are a master at creating contrasting sensations as you stroke my throbbing, precum-draining cock. My body writhes under you in pain but also in pleasure. I want to roll over on my back, pull your hands out of my ass and kick your face but I don't even plan on doing that. I've earned my punishment. "Max, do what you want...", I mutter against the leather surface of the sofa.

MUSCLE MARINE:

But that thought escapes your mind and you start to scream into the couch when I start pulling my fist out of your ass. When I almost get it out, I push back in, hard and long. Its like its ripping you apart, splitting you wide open. And you know things will not be the same this time. I love the way your body is shaking, quivering, writhing under me, while I grab a tight hold of your cock and stroke it long, making you leaking on the leather couch.


DREAM BREAKER:

I don´t fight back, not even struggle. All I do is moan, scream and roar as your hands are working my ass and cock. If it was any other man he would be a dead man by now but then, it´s you. I have submitted to you completely cause you are right I deserve the punishment. I don't know how this is all going to end, maybe you'll throw me out considering me as useless pathetic case or maybe you'll forgive me finally and we can move on somehow. I admit that thought makes me worried, even scared. I have no idea how it's all going to end and yet, at the same time for some strange reason, my cock seems to be exhilarated, enjoying the action.

MUSCLE MARINE:

I start fisting you harder, sending shots of pain through your body. "You took a risk. You had a death wish going up against him? You wanted to die? Why?" I slow down to give you a chance to answer, but nothing. You don't say a thing. I pull my fist violently out of your ass, and flip you. Landing punches with my wet fist onto your abs. "The fuck happened to you? You are one of the best fighters around. And had I not walked in on you... he would have killed you." I pound your gut harder, like a mad beast, unaware that I might be hurting you. But I am trying to wake up something in you... something I feel is fading away.


DREAM BREAKER:

I am like a rag doll in your hands, without a will of my own, resigned to receive the punishment that rightly belongs to me. I don't even want to explain what happened in my fight with DAN BAKO, if you can even call it that, how he knocked me out with a weight disc before I could even raise my fist. That detail doesn't matter now, not anymore. I betrayed your trust, I lied to you and I did the exact opposite of what you told me to do. I had betrayed my promise and I was due my punishment.

Then I hear your words " You are one of the best fighters around..." and a small spark of hope is awakened inside me. Do you believe in me after all? If you wanted to break my neck, twist me into a pretzel... you would most certainly have done it already. Or do you just want to prolong my punishment, make me suffer longer? Your fist strikes my gut again and again, each time harder, until suddenly something awakens inside me, the defeated fighter rises from the ground to his knees and finally stumbles slowly to his feet. I open my eyes to see your fist approaching my gut once again.

What happens next was not planned. The fighter in me is acting completely on instinct when suddenly I raise my arm and wrap my hand around your fist, blocking your blow dry. I clench my fist tightly around yours, as if to show that I am still standing strong. I make it clear to you I don't want to hurt you as I twist your arm down until it lands softly on my flexed abs. "Enough Max!"

MUSCLE MARINE:

I bitch slap you hard across the face with my other hand. "Dont you fucking take that tone with me. Not after you have done. I will decide when it is enough." I grab your head with both hands and headbutt you in your face, almost cracking your nose. I let you go, pull back a step, lift a foot and kick you hard in the gut, sending you reeling back down onto the couch.

"I am going to do to you what he couldnt... give you a good fight. He's a fucking coward who found the easy way out and knock you out with a weight plate." I stand there, and peeling my tank top off me - knowing that the sight of my ripped upperbody makes you weak - and wave you off the couch and over to me.



"Fight me like you wanted to fight him. Show me what you are made of." I bounce my pecs and I know its making you hard, and unable to think straight... hahahaha or not.

DREAM BREAKER:

You know how much your sculpted body has always turned me on, how you make my cock grow hard in seconds when you bounce your pecs and combine that with your narrow hips, that perfect ass and that huge bulge between your legs in those tight jeans makes me crazy. And you use this to your advantage, you bastard.

Hard cock or not, I jump off the couch faster than you could have guessed and surge on you. My big, heavy shoulders slam into your gut, sending you reeling backwards against the wall. I follow you, grabbing your wrists in my hand and locking them against the wall above your head. My nose is bleeding from the headbutt you just gave me as I look into your eyes. “Did you enjoy to break my nose?”, I hiss as I tilt my head back and quickly change the direction of it, bringing my forehead towards your head stopping it just an inch from your face. Instead of breaking your nose, I kiss your lips unexpectedly. You open your eyes and see me smiling as my free fist strikes your gut with all my strength.

MUSCLE MARINE:

What happens next is so sudden... and not sure where you got the burst of energy from. One minute you were this docile almost dead fighter and now, you are pushing me back hard, slamming me to the wall. I feel your shoulder in my gut and then when you pull back, the last thing I expected was a kiss from you...

But then here comes the pain as you land a hard fist to my gut. I try to fold over your fist. "You fucking twat. Now you get cocky and in a fighting mood?" As I drop slightly, I slide one arm between your thighs and strike up into your balls. "I am going to make you sing... just like I did DAN."

DREAM BREAKER:

You did it again. You woke up that fighter in me who was defeated for a moment. I close my thick thighs and snap your knee between them blocking it just an inch before it could have caused major problems. I smirk "Max dear, wasn't it you who taught me this?", I chuckle.

"But this is something I have learned all by myself!". I grab you by the throat and lift you up against the wall, while I aim my blow at the same spot on your gut again, wanting to rearrange your insides.

MUSCLE MARINE:

I suddenly feel trapped... my arm stopped before it reaches its target. I look up to see you smiling that devilish grin, and your hand snaps around my throat. You start lifting me up, grating my back against the bricked wall of the loft. I feel your knuckles grind into my gut, giving me no time to react other than wince in pain.

You start pounding my gut hard. 'Where was this fighter at the gym? How? Why now?' But a couple of punches later, although in pain, I lift my leg and connect it between your legs to your exposed hanging balls, making you break your choking hold on my throat and pulling back away from me.

DREAM BREAKER:

I grunt as I take a step back grabbing my aching nuts. "I may have been a good fighter in the past, but remember that you made me what I am today. You polished me ..I learned from the best!". I straighten my back again and surge on you using my elbow to spear your chest, wanting to send you against the wall again.

MUSCLE MARINE:

I dont move, but rather stop your elbow before it hits my chest. "Why are you attacking me? You should have fought this way with DAN, not me." I duck under your huge frame, and strike up with my elbow in return, to your chest, then chin, sending you reeling back and falling again on that couch.

DREAM BREAKER:

I land sitting on the couch as I watch you kind of admiring way. My chest, chin and balls are aching as hell but I don´t show any of that to you. "I don´t want to fight you, you know that but there is something you should know. Max, can I be completely honest with you? I want to see BAKO again. I feel it's my duty, and I want you to accept that. You understand that I have to, don't you? I have to do it as a fighter, and I have to do it as your partner."

MUSCLE MARINE:

"And have him kill you? This time I will not be there to help you. You are on your own." As I straighten up next to the wall. I flex and make my muscles ripple. "Remember what he did to me for months..." I start to walk slowly towards you. I stand between your wide open legs, bend down a bit and grab your cock. I stroke it and get it hard almost instantly. "See how easy you are to play. He will devour you alive."

DREAM BREAKER:

"No, I want you to know this time he won´t do it. I have learned my lesson. Besides his hand is not your hand, if you know what I mean", I smirk as I slowly get up from the sofa and wrap my arm around your waist squeezing your buttock. "He won´t devour me, but I might devour you!"

MUSCLE MARINE:

"Hahahahahaha. You can try." As I slide my hand to your cock and grab it tight, along with your balls. I cup you. "You still think you are bigger down there? Wanna compare yet again?" As I grab one of your hands at my ass and bring it to the front, cupping my bulge. "Guess who is still the biggest around?" I smile when I hear you gasp.

DREAM BREAKER:

"Hahahaha, you are right Max. I might be taller, I might be heavier but down here you are the boss, and will always be", I chuckle as I grab your giant cock and place it next to mine. "I am not a small boy either but you are a fucking king!", I continue as I go down to my knees still holding your cock in my hand.

I rub the thick tip of your cock against my cheeks and guide it slowly on my lips as I open my mouth slightly. My left hand moves cupping your balls, squeezing them softly as I glance at your face. Then all of the sudden I add pressure on your trapped nuts and twist them good. "Never let your guard down you always taught me", I chuckle as I strike an ..uppercut with my right hand into that same spot on your gut.

MUSCLE MARINE:

I double over, folding onto your fist as I drop hard to my knees in front of you. I groan and grunt loudly from the pain slicing me in half. I reach out as I drop and grab your shoulders tight, clawing almost, and with the strength I am able to summon, I squeeze your traps tight, putting a hurt on you. I pull my head back and strike your forehead, connecting face to face, trying to knock you out.

"You fucking bitch. Trying to give me a taste of my medicine... after I..." i cut my words short as I pull back and headbutt you again. I feel your grip on my balls loosen. Pulling myself back a bit, I raise my arm, pull it back and strike a fist to your chest, hard, sending you flat on your back.

DREAM BREAKER:

I am so dazed I hardly can see you after your head butts. All is blurry and I can´t focus on what´s going on when your punch lands on my chest sending me on my back. But my fighter instincts are still somewhere there when my long legs wrap suddenly around your thighs pulling you closer to me and twisting them as I try to make you to lose your balance and fall down.

MUSCLE MARINE:

I feel your legs wrap around my waist and I smile as your ass instantly pulls off the ground a bit. My cock slides under you, rubbing along your ass crack...

DREAM BREAKER:

My dazed state disappears like the blink of an eye as I feel your thick cock head sliding along my crack. Instinctively, I squeeze my thighs tighter around you and pull your body closer, watching your face. I'm not sure if you want to punish me or if you've forgiven me..

MUSCLE MARINE:

I smile at you as I feel your mix of fear and lust when you snap your legs tight around me. But they are quivering - as if not sure. "What's the matter Alex? Scared of me now?" I keep gyrating and bumping my pelvis, making my cock rub along your crack. "Relax. It's all good."

DREAM BREAKER:

Hearing your words my entire body relax, my ass cheeks are not tense any more as I pull you almost on top of me. "You should still punish me a bit, don´t you think?", I chuckle.

MUSCLE MARINE:

As you say those words, my cock-head pushes at your ass cheeks, spreading them open and reaching your hole, it pushes in. Popping your hole, I feel your body instantly tense again, muscles tightening... like you are being fucked for the first time. I know I am entering your unexpectedly, and I build on that. As I see your eyes go wide, in shock, I keep pushing in, making you feel every inch of my massive cock. "You so badly want to face DAN? You thought you were tough enough..."

DREAM BREAKER:

Your cock is able to surprise me every time, make my body react as if it was the first time, wrapping tightly around your invading shaft. It´s a sensation I can´t explain to myself too well. A sensation of opposite emotions and feelings, pain and pleasure, panic and lust, something that blows my mind each time you enter into me. I wrap my arms around you and dig my fingertips into the skin of your back as I feel you drilling all the time deeper and deeper. I look at your face and stay quiet for a moment. "Yes Max, I am sure of that. I need to do it."

MUSCLE MARINE:

"Am gonna try to fuck that idea out of your mind. But I am sure I won't be able to. But at least, you would still be a good fuck. Hahahahaha." As I start pulling out and then slam into you hard. I feel your whole body tense. But I know soon enough, you won't be able to keep flexing so hard. I fuck you deep and in no time, you collapse back onto the floor, enjoying my thrusts in you. I pound you hard and long.

DREAM BREAKER:

Despite of my attempts I always lose this battle against you. And I lose it gladly. My body stops struggle, stops trying to squeeze you inside me but instead surrender in front of your dominating tool, enjoying the each and every thrusts of your giant cock that hits my prostate every time you shove it into my body. My cock is jolting up and down wildly, leaking in the rhythm of your thrusts as I feel my heavy balls rising inside my sack. "Max, fuck... you make me cum"

MUSCLE MARINE:

"Damn right... Lose that load. Empty those pussy tanks." I slap them a bit, sending a jolt of pain through you. I fuck you harder. "He almost killed you... either because you were such a pussy to fight back? Or..." I push deeper into you.

DREAM BREAKER:

My cock sprays a good load of precum when you slap my nuts. I am fighting to hold back, to wait for you but you know what you are doing, how to control my body. "Max..", I try to speak between my moans, "..I really had no chance, you know it.. but the next time will be different, I promise". I stop talking for a moment as I feel my balls churning, ready to send my load out of them.."Or what? What do you want to say?"

MUSCLE MARINE:

Instead of answering, I pound harder... knowing you cannot hold on anymore. I see your cock spewing pre-cum profusely. I smile. "Cum. Cum for me..."

DREAM BREAKER:

My body starts to tremble, convulsing uncontrollably as the wave runs through my body. I tilt my head backwards and lift my hips up taking your cock even deeper, drilling against my joynut. I moan loud, like some fucking beast getting impaled when my cock expands for a moment and shoots a huge load with pressure on my face, chest and abs.. rope by rope covering them with white thick cum. "MAX! FUCK..."

MUSCLE MARINE:

"DAMN RIGHT. I PLAY YOU GOOD, BUDDY. And this is why I wont let someone like DAN have the pleasure of killing you." I fuck you harder while you are having your orgasm. Your cock sprays everywhere, like a geyser. I laugh. I push deep one last time and hold you still and start pumping load after load into you, filling you up. "You have my blessing to go see DAN. But if you fail this time... I will be the one to kill you."

DREAM BREAKER:

I sit up as if seized by a convulsion when your load hits my JOYNUT with pressure, making my body tremble again. My hands wrap around you and grip your buttocks tightly, as if I were in a trance, until I finally calm down, my breathing steadies, and I lean against your body. I lift my gaze to your face and kiss your ripped pec. "I won't fail you, Max, I promise. You won't be disappointed in me."


I AM COMING FOR YOU  DAN!

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Published: 2025-08-09, viewed 162 times.

Comments

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Apollo Dante

2025-08-17 21:26

Again the amazing comments here tell you everything about this story! Dream Breaker is definitely on a roll this month and this latest action involving Muscle Marine was just such a high quality piece of storytelling ……it was indeed a HOT story …awesome exchanges and more! So pleased you added this here..thanks to you both!


fight stud (deleted member)

2025-08-16 22:05

Amazing . Yep.. Had it all.


Tiberius Stone

2025-08-10 18:57

I know first hand how DB treats his close friends, and this encounter with MM is no exception.

Powerful and descriptive action between these two dominant characters.

Looking forward to where the next confrontation leads.

--T.


THE STEPHEN

2025-08-09 16:38

Everything you need in one compact story. I liked it a lot. I don't know you from before but I can see you have good chemistry. Looking forward to the next one .


BAKOF

2025-08-09 16:02

nice story with marine man. waiting 4 u big man.


Ayindei

2025-08-09 11:27

This story exudes incredible energy from start to finish. You can feel the tension between Max and Alex, halfway between a fight and an erotic game, and that's what makes it so captivating. The text manages to convey both the power of the blows and the attraction between them, as if each movement could tip the balance from combat to something more intimate. What I also find “amusing” is that it fits into a larger story, with Dan in the background, and you feel like you're entering a universe that's already well established and created from scratch. You can almost hear the lines in your head, and it brings the characters to life. And then there's this mix of violence, provocation, and complicity... you never know if you're reading a scene of reckoning or a strange game between two guys who know each other inside out.


BraveAjay

2025-08-09 11:08

Namaste. It is a great pleasure to comment this story as the first one in my new job in The Shelter.
I have been following the adventures of these two gentleman and again I must say the story was not a disappointment. It is obviously a bridge between something that happened before and something that is going to take place. Exciting statement of deep friendship. I am anxious to see what will happen next.
Thank you for sharing your story on The Shelter.


Dream Breaker

2025-08-09 11:14

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Hey buddy!
Good to see you working (hehehehe)... no, seriously..congratulations for your new job in the Shelter. And thanks for you encouraging words. I try not to fail any of you.


Freaker

2025-08-09 10:22

Guys what a confrontation. First Muscle Marine at his best, Real Alpha. Then Dream showing his fighter face in front of him... I loved it and can wait you Dream, to meet with Dan Bako. I m not sure he will see the same guy and have a chance.

Hot story with all it needs to make one happy. Thank for sharing in THE HIGH TABLE

Max Freaker


Dream Breaker

2025-08-09 11:12

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Thanks Max,
Now when I had the "blessing" of MM, I really can´t wait for to face DAN.
Thanks for your kind words - again!