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RING OF VENGEANCE
Kad Royce
How many hours did I spend crying, hidden under the flight of stairs? How many times have I had to face the mockery of my entire group of students, sometimes even spitting? How many times have the fraternity parties seen me end up tied to a chair, naked and tied up while guys, my 'comrades', my brothers abused me? Every time you were there. I didn’t expect a look from you, I didn’t expect compassion from you, just that you leave me alone.
You were taller than me, stronger, more handsome. I was the provincial who arrived here thanks to his academic results, skinny, short, without a boyfriend. I had hoped that the fraternity would allow me to find a family. It separated me from mine. I no longer dared to go home because I felt bad. I no longer dared to leave the university as if I liked this pain you were causing me. 5 years of suffering! For me, it’s what my studies look like.
As soon as I graduated, I had only one idea in mind. Change everything. 15 years of psychotherapy and years spent in the gym to change my body. Intense training in BBJ, MMA and struggle so that no one can touch my hand anymore. An entry into the amateur world of combat sports so that everyone understands that now it was me who was giving the blows. Despite this, despite my willingness to get by, I know that cannot forget the past. I can’t forget your face, Jake.
My nights are still populated by you, you haunted me and how many times did I wake up crying, dripping with sweat while you mistreated me in my dreams. I am mad at you because you destroyed my life. You prevented me from having normal emotional relationships. It’s not a coincidence that my only sex moments are after a fight when I beat the guy. You allowed me to know something else, Jake. But I know that I want to change.
Jake the Man
Friday night and I head over to the Fight Club to check out the action… the place is packed with horny guys drinking and watching the fights… I ask the bartender if there are any cocky young punks looking to make a name for themselves on the roster tonight that I could destroy and humiliate to entertain the fans.
“Jake , I think I got just what you want , young pretty boy here for the first time …….he’s yours in the third fight of the night.” I thank him, make my way around the bar and head to the locker room . Since I am a regular,, I have a locker which I unlock and slowly undress check myself out in the mirror and flex and kiss each cep…
“Oh yeah , gonna have some fun tonight fucking up some punk“
I slip on a red jock and slowly make my way to the curtain separating the locker room from the fight area. I watch the end of the second fight as Brutus demolishes his opponent and then fucks him on the ropes to the cheers of the fans. Brutus passes me as he comes into the locker room and I high5 him…
My introduction starts and he slaps my ass “Go get him Jake”…
I make my way to the ring high5 guys along the way… Music is playing “he is 6’, 195 pounds… Jake the Man !”. I get to the ring , climb in and flex and pose for the fans… 46 years old and feeling great . I head to my corner to await the challenger .
Kad Royce
These fights, these victories against super experienced guys allow me to rebuild myself. Every time, it’s my stalker that I destroy and the more I destroy, the more I feel like I’m moving away from those bad memories. This evening, the manager asked me to participate in a match. He knows my story and promised to make me a champion. This evening is my evening, he told me.
I am going to face a fighter who according to him is a legend of this federation. This guy is experienced, has an exceptional track record and a victory against him would allow him to make an impression. I must admit that I am quite stressed in the locker room while I change. But I have to turn this stress into strength. That’s always how I do it.
The noise of the crowd, the cheers of the audience encourage me to leave my locker room and approach the ring. I am no longer very young, 32 years old, even if I am starting on the circuit. On the other hand, my physique continues to arouse the same enthusiasm and the cries of the crowd when I arrive in my trunks highlighting my 202 lbs. of pure muscles make me want to destroy my opponent
But the closer I get to the ring, the more I tell myself that I know this guy. A few meters before climbing, I stop for a few moments, as if petrified. "No....." said I only in a voice loud enough for all the guys in the room to hear.
I take a step to make sure that I wasn’t mistaken, then another... It’s not possible. It can’t be him... Jake!!!! This man who made me suffer so much is in front of me. I am going to face my harasser!
Jake the Man
I listen to your introduction and watch as you make way to the ring… There is something strangely familiar about you… You hesitate when you get to the ring apron almost like you recognize something in me that frightens you…
Then as climb through the ropes into the ring it hits me… You are that punkass kid from school… I look at you… My expression tells you that I recognize you…. Oh this is gonna be fun, I think to myself… ”Hey Punk , remember how these guns used to mess you up ?”
“Remember this ass on your face smothering you ? Well tonight you get to relive it and even more pain and suffering on top of that…”
I laugh at you knowing how I intimidate you…
Kad Royce
When I am in the ring, there is no longer any doubt. I recognize your assertiveness, your perverse look, that sadistic smile you had when you looked at me. The worst part is that you recognize me. Your words show me that you have no doubt.
Suddenly, I am no longer a fighter. I become the young boy I was in university again. I am no longer one of the stars of combat sports. I am the young guy alone in front of an entire fraternity who mocked him, who not only spoke behind his back, but humiliated him in public.
The screams of the crowd remind me of the screams of your friends when you organized public humiliations. I would like to have the strength to walk backwards, to turn back. But you fascinate me. Like a magnet, you attract me or rather you hypnotize me.
I can’t move and I look at you, totally dumbfounded as if your muscles, your arrogance, and your beauty had turned me into a stone.
Jake the Man
The bell ring and I circle out of my corner toward you… We both circle cautiously slowly drawing closer to each other… I raise my arms and begin to wiggle my fingers… Looking at you… “I’m gonna drain your little cock and then fuck your ass one more time before making you beg me to stop the pain and let you submit “… We lunge into each other in classic elbow and collar… Both breathing hard as we bull into each other… I am impressed with your strength…. I ease up the pressure for a second and as you push up against me I drill my knee up into your lower abs and then again… As you bend I lock you into a side headlock grinding my bicep around you as I “parade “ you around the ring as the fans cheer…
Kad Royce
The bell rings and I feel the fear eating me. This fight is first against myself. I have to fight against my past that comes back to me like a heavy truck in the mouth. I try to resist it by feeding on my rage. We start classically in collar and elbow, and I try to resist you. For a few seconds, I feel like I see a form of astonishment in your gaze.
As if you hadn’t imagined that I could have strength now. It pleases me and for one hundredth of a second, I lose my concentration. A violent knee strike in the abs comes to punish me for this gross mistake. As I fold in two, I feel your powerful arms surrounding my neck.
My mouth is against your ribs, and I feel your scent against my nose. This smell that is always the same and of which I was so afraid. I rage to let myself be fooled again by my demons. I bend my elbow and try to hit your ribs as hard as possible hoping that it will be enough for you to let go of me.
Jake the Man
AAAAWWWW… Your elbow slams back into my ribs… I wrap my arms around your body… My bulge in my red jock tight against your ass… ”Feel familiar loser”, I taunt you…
Then I grunt and lift you up and throw you over me in a belly to back supplex… BOOOM… the whole ring shakes as we hit…
Kad Royce
Why can this guy control me like that. My elbows were probably not strong enough to disturb him. Maybe I’m not powerful enough to counter it. You wrap both arms around my waist, and I feel your big dick against my ass like when we were alone in my student room.
Why can’t I let go of my past. In fact, my past is destroying me. It’s because of my past that I can’t fight as I would like. While I am lost in my thoughts, obsessed with my past, I feel like I’m taking off. Holy shit... I find myself on the ground, my back burning and my head spinning. "What’s wrong with you Kad! React!"
Jake the Man
I quickly roll to my feet and as you lay there on your back I look down on you… ”Get up and fight loser , you’re pathetic“…
I reach down and pull you up by your hair to your feet and quickly armbar your right arm pushing that arm up high against your back…
I have you walking around the ring on your tip toes…
Kad Royce
I want to rub my back, but you are much faster than me. You grab me by the hair and start making me walk on tiptoe. Everything comes back to me as a whole. You had done exactly the same thing at the last party of our fraternity.
I was there in your hands and all your friends, all your disciplines were hitting me, spitting on me. If I weren’t in public, I think I would cry. But this time rage seems to nourish me and maybe in a positive way. My arm is twisted and it hurts almost as much as my back. I lift one foot back and try to violently hit your shin so that you let go of me.
Jake the Man
I am enjoying myself humiliating you in the armbar as I walk you around the ring on your tip toes… Fans laughing… Then you lift your foot and violently kick me in the shin…
AAAAAWWWWWW… I release your arm as I bend forward … stumbling back from you…
Kad Royce
For a few seconds, I know it’s time to make a decision that will undoubtedly change my life. Either I remain in the past and remain under your domination, or I decide that things have now changed. But I need to decide quickly.
I try to take back in hand my pain, my past and my life. It probably does a lot of things, but I have to fight against this ghost that destroys me. I approach you as quickly as possible and come to explode the palm of my hand against your muscular chest.
Jake the Man
WTF.. I look up and you are in my face… I see something in your eyes that I have never seen before… Determination… And then the palm of your hand slams against my chest… WHACK… The sound echoes around the Club… My chest stinks from the hit… But more importantly I am put on notice that things have changed in this fight and the fans sense it too…
Kad Royce
I see you wincing when you receive my palm strike on the chest. It’s the first time that it’s me who takes the initiative to lay hands on you. Until now, you had always forced me to put my hands on your pecs to pinch your nipples while you were kissing me against my will.
From now on, things will change. I see you stepping back and in turn putting my arms around your waist trying to stop you from breathing with a violent bearhug.
Jake the Man
Before I can recover from the shock and pain of your strike, you continue your attack by wrapping your arms around me in a vicious bear hug squeezing my core with strength I never dreamed you possessed…
You lift me off the canvas as you squeeze and shake me… Looking into your eyes I see fire… You are constricting my breathing… The fans are now on their feet cheering wildly for you… I use my hands to box your ears to set them ringing and affect your balance in an effort to break free of your iron grip…
Kad Royce
For a few moments, I feel like the king of the world. I am here to make you suffer and the crowd encourages me. I have the impression that we are in the fraternity building and that it is now all our brothers who are by my side and no longer yours.
But suddenly, I see everything black, everything wobbles. You just exploded both your hands on my skull. The crowd roars with pleasure as I let go of you and stagger towards the ropes to regain my senses.
Jake the Man
You let go of me and I fall on my ass on the canvas and then I fall over to my side as I suck in much needed air after your crushing bear hug depleted the oxygen in my lungs …….my face is beet red …….I now know what what you are capable of and need to use caution …….I roll over onto my all fours and slowly start to push myself up so I can hopefully end this fight quickly before you can really do. Some damage to my body ………
Kad Royce
We are both catching our breath and a kind of tension begins to be visible in the audience. Some encourage you to go faster than me, others ask me to quickly regain my senses. It’s still spinning but I have no choice.
I must regain the advantage not only to please my fans but especially to take revenge for everything you have made me endure all these years. I turn around and see you trying to get up. I run towards you rushing hoping to be fast enough to send you back to the ground with a knee in the face.
Jake the Man
I can hear the fans yelling for me to get up and finish you off… I am struggling but up on all fours now when suddenly your knee slams hard into the side of my face driving me back down onto the canvas… Dazed and rattled…
Kad Royce
My knee hits your head with all the rage I’m capable of. I see your head go back and then your body collapse on the ring mat. I know that I have to hurry! The crowd encourages me to finish you! I can’t help looking at you. I can’t move.
For a few seconds, I tell myself that you are going to put me through hell if I dare to lay my hand on you again. For a few seconds, I am no longer in this ring but this closet in which you had locked me up for hours after having fucked me all evening while you promised me that you would not touch anymore. I am petrified by this memory.
Jake the Man
Flat on my face again on the canvas dazed and rattled from your knee to the side of my head waiting for what you might do to me next as the fans shout for you to finish me off but you hesitate and give me a chance to roll toward the ropes with the intention of sliding out of the ring and getting myself together and my head back in this fight….
I roll close the ropes …….
Kad Royce
When I see you rolling towards the ropes, I understand that I am no longer in our fraternity and that I am no longer 18 years old. I try to rush towards you to catch up but you are too fast. I see you getting out of the ring.
My anger is becoming incredible. I don’t know if it is directed at you and everything you have made me undergo or against me and my hesitations. I am also trying to slip out of the ring to join you and complete the work undertaken.
Jake the Man
I make it to the ropes without any interference from you… I think to myself what a LOSER… So many chances he had in this fight and he blew it… Then I slide out of the ring and begin to walk around the ring shaking out the cobwebs in my brain from your kick…
Kad Royce
I blame myself for all this time lost. I blame myself for all these chances that I can never grasp. I slip between the ropes to come back to you and try to send you against the metal barricades that separate us from the audience.
Jake the Man
Walking around the ring shaking out my head and preparing to slide back into the ring when you come up behind me and grab my wrist and whip me into the metal barricades that separate the ring from the audience…. The fans jump up off their seats cheering you as I stumble back from the barricade…
Kad Royce
I don’t want to give you any chance, like you never gave me any when we were at the university; I’ll let you step back just so you feel like I’m hesitating again. I try to support your head between my powerful thighs. I hold you by the waist hoping to lift you and explode your back on the barricade.
Jake the Man
My back hits the barricades hard and pain shoots up and down my spine, I stumble forward and you shove my head between your powerful thighs… I feel your arms wrap around my core and then with one swift movement you lift over your head and crash me down into the barricades again…
My back again explodes in pain… I lay on the concrete floor feeling like I was hit by a bus… ”Who is this guy and what other damage can he do to me ?” I begin to wonder…
Kad Royce
I see you on the ground. But the rage I have inside me is too strong. I want you to suffer. I want you to feel all the pain you caused, all the sorrow you have caused. I start to crush your belly with my feet while I hope you will writhe in pain.
Jake the Man
Before I can get up you start to stomp on my stomach and then stand on my belly crushing me with your weight… You tease me… Stepping off and then immediately back onto my stomach… Then you step off and stomp on my stomach before stepping back onto it…
I feel so sick like I want to throw up… You seem to be enjoying making me suffer… I start off yelling for you to stop and then moving into moaning and finally into whimpering and then begging you to stop all of which makes you press even harder making me suffer more…
Kad Royce
I see you moaning and suffering and you can’t even imagine how much it makes me feel good. But if you only knew how much I want to hurt you even more. I grab you by the hair to straighten you and stick your back to my chest so that your head is at the bottom.
I hold your legs firmly by the arms and wedge yours behind my legs. When I hold you firmly, I start to jump forward so that your massive body comes crashing onto the ground outside the ring.
Jake the Man
Laying on the concrete floor when you grab me by the hair and haul me up against you upside down and then jump and slam me down face first onto the concrete floor… I lay there motionless… I start to drool … I am moaning very softly… In my mind I am wondering what happened to me that I let you manhandle me like this…
Kad Royce
You are pathetic, you are pitiable. I don’t even understand what could have pushed me to let myself do it all these years. I don’t even understand what could have pushed me to let you humiliate me during all these years. I grab your hair to get you back in the ring and I try to go up there too to finally pin you.
Jake the Man
Laying on the concrete floor drooling and moaning softly as you roughly grab me by my hair and yank me up and throw me against the ring apron and then grab me around my hips and toss me into the ring… I am on my back…
I stare up at the overhead lights… Your last vicious move has taken the fight out of me… You climb into the ring and stand there looking down on me like I am a piece of trash…
Kad Royce
I have not yet completely won the fight. The referee did not count the pin. I get on you in such a way that my bulge is well at the level of your mouth and that you can smell my man’s scent. I pick up one of your legs while shoving trunks to reveal your dick which is hard and stiff by saying to the audience 'See how I excite it'.
Jake the Man
You mount me, not in the normal way but in a way that allows you to cover my mouth with your big bulge… My nostrils fill with your man scent and my lips on your wet speedo taste your pre… You push down my wet red jock to release my throbbing cock as you shout to the fans “Look how excited he is my victorious Cock “…
You lift one of my legs to complete your pin of me… The ref seems so slow to count me out giving me time for the fans to snap pictures with their phones….
I am totally crushed and dominated by you and even more difficult for me to imagine humiliated by you who I so often humiliated… two … OMG … what could be worse… three…
I hear the bell ring… You won !!!! Thank goodness it’s over and I can get out of here quickly and quietly…
Kad Royce
What you don’t know is that this match is not over. What you don’t know is that I really intend to make you pay for everything you made me endure during my studies. I want not only to humiliate you, but I want this humiliation to be filmed by each of the spectators and broadcast worldwide.
I want this humiliation to be greater than anything you’ve ever put me through. I take your trunks and I use it to attach your joined hands to the lowest rope in the ring.
Jake the Man
WTF… You pull my jock off completely and use it to tie my hands together around the bottom ropes… Lots of the fans fighting to get closer to the ring to take pictures of my naked body struggling to get free unsuccessfully I know you are planning something as you walk around the ring…
The suspense of not knowing what you intend to do is really troubling me… ”You don’t have to do this… I’m sorry for being a jerk to you in school… You can let me go and we can be friends now…“ I plead with you…
Kad Royce
I see fear invading your eyes. I see fear starting to inhabit you as it took my guts when I found myself facing you in our fraternity. I am in front of you. I place my legs between your chest. I clip your hair to straighten the head before penetrating your mouth violently until my balls hit your chin.
Jake the Man
My hands are tied together and to the bottom ropes… I am begging you to let me go when you drop down with your legs on either side of my chest and you fall forward thrusting your cock deep into my mouth savagely so deep that your balls hit my chin….
I am gaging on your cock.. Tears are running down my face as your cock deep throats me… The fans are going crazy with their phones taking pictures and videos of you torturing me…
Kad Royce
Seeing you cry makes me feel crazy good. Seeing you cry reminds me of the nights I cried while you raped me in the evening. I can no longer have any pity for you, and I want to see you choke on my dick.
Jake the Man
My wet eyes grow large as your cock chokes me and I gag more and more… Your pubes are actually scratching my face as you press down harder driving your cock deeper into my throat… Your balls are banging into my chin… Your man scent is filling my nostrils… I feel like I am going to pass out…
Kad Royce
I see that you are losing consciousness, and I know that I will achieve what I want: to humiliate you as deeply as possible. I continue by wedging your head with my hands on your skull.
Jake the Man
You keep gaging me with your cock and things get darker and darker for me as everything slows down drastically and then I pass out… Total darkness… I have been KO’ed by your cock…
Kad Royce
You fall completely unconscious. For a few moments, I can’t refuse the pleasure of seeing your inert mouth filled with my dick. I look at the audience, and I see in their eyes like the desire for me to continue this humiliation. I address the fans by telling them 'What if we tried to get him to reconnect? We can’t leave a guy Ko in the ring" and everyone understands what I want to do with this mischievous smile.
Jake the Man
After gaging and choking on your cock I finally pass out . My body lays still but my mind races through scenes of the past and all the terrible ways in which I humiliated you in front of others thinking I was being funny and also satisfying my own lustful desires… But now all that is over… It is peaceful and restful…
Kad Royce
I approach you and lift your legs to place them on each of my shoulders. I think I want to go even further than you in humiliation. I put my big, stiff dick in your tight little ass. I’m taking it easy so you can feel every inch.
Jake the Man
I am slowly coming back around and feeling a new pain… It is coming from my ass… WTF… As I become more conscious I see my legs on your shoulders and AAAAAWWWWWWW…
Your big cock is pushing into my tight ass… NNNNNOOOOOOOOO… Just as your cock filled my mouth and throat and choked me out now your cock is ripping my ass wide open as you thrust in deeper and deeper…
And all the fans are watching and taking pictures and videos…. NNNNNOOOOOOO… This can’t be happening… But it is… I see the look on your face and know it is only going to get worse !!!!
Kad Royce
I try to bend your chest so that your dick is as close as possible to your face. I’m trying to bend you in half to hurt you and humiliate you by showing the public how much you are made for being fucked.
Jake the Man
My hands are tied together and to the ropes by my red jock… My legs are on your shoulders and your hard , thick dick is in my tight ass tearing it wide open… I think there is no way you can punish or humiliate me more and then you you begin to bend me in half so my hard and leaking cock is as close as possible to my face and leaking pre down on it…
You point out to the now stroking fans how much I am made for being being fucked… The fans are loving watching the bully get punished and humiliated…
Kad Royce
Each of my strokes becomes more and more violent. I don’t even think about giving you pleasure anymore and I hope you are suffering from each of my strokes. I lean a little towards your chest hoping that my abs come to rub your stiff and fleeting dick.
Jake the Man
Your strokes are more and more violent really hurting me now and as you lean forward more your ripped abs rub my throbbing cock causing it to leak more and more pre…
You are tearing my ass apart like a savage animal with it’s trapped prey… You are teasing my cock more and more with your abs…. The fans can not believe the way you are manhandling me and making me suffer as well as be humiliated…
Kad Royce
The more I am in the process of making you suffer, the more I take a liking for it. For a bit, I understand this feeling of intoxication that you may have felt when you mistreated me. this feeling of power, of controlling everything. I understand why you were like that because I am now. My body trembles, my breathing heats up, and I feel that I cum inside you.
Jake the Man
I am watching you and sense something changing , your body begins to tremble and your breathing begins to change and suddenly you shoot a large load of your juices into me… String after string of your warm cum shooting into my ass and filling it…
Kad Royce
Strangely, as I am emptying myself in you, my pleasure changes. It’s no longer this desire to humiliate you, it’s no longer this desire to hurt you. It’s a more sexual pleasure. And this pleasure bothers me more than the desire to humiliate you. I never imagined being able to take pleasure with the one who was the source of such an important trauma.
I look at you and once I am empty, I withdraw from you. I am a little lost between the desire to turn the page and the wound you have caused in me long time ago.
Jake the Man
Your cock had been pounding my ass and ripping it apart… Hitting my prostate over and over like a jackhammer…. Unrelenting anger and rage until you fill me with your juices breeding me, owning me, making me your bitch , but now you pull out of me… You stand over me looking lost in your thoughts…
As I lay there humbled by you… Defeated and humiliated…I can not help but admire and dare I say like what I see… What is it about you that I so disliked in college… Hard to imagine when I see you now in front of me…
Kad Royce
I see you and I look into your eyes. All these memories come back to me, all those atrocious moments when I was your sex toy, your punching bag and that of your friends. I approach you and untie the link that holds one of your hands. But I keep your wrist in my palm and with the second, I break it with a sharp and powerful blow that melds the crowd.
Jake the Man
I watch you looking at me… You have defeated me, fucked me, totally humiliated me… What more could you possibly do to me… You bend to untie the link that holds one of my hands…
I close my eyes believing it’s all over and I will soon be free… but instead with a shard and powerful blow you viciously break my wrist… I howl in pain… Some of the fans turn their heads so as not to watch your brutality….
Kad Royce
It’s as if the fact of having stirred up the past was driving me crazy. Seeing you scream in pain intoxicates me with pleasure. I don’t ask myself the question of whether I am now the bully. I just want to hurt you. The smile that crosses my face is no longer a nice guy’s smile; it’s a crazy smile. Your hands hang like two inanimate pieces of your body. I let them go and go towards your knees. I take your right leg and with an elbow, I try to break the kneecap in the way I wish it would be most painful.
Jake the Man
You broke the wrists on both my hands and now they hang useless at my side as you turn your attention to my right leg and elbow drop down hard on the kneecap… AAAAWWWW… You laugh and do it again…
NNNOOOO… And then a third time… You have become the bully enjoying your domination of me and making me suffer for everything I ever did to you… My kneecap is visibly swelling…
Kad Royce
I see you suffering and it makes me smile. I don’t care what the audience may think of me now. The only thing that matters to me is seeing you suffer. You still have a valid leg. I take it and start hitting it against the turnbuckle.
Jake the Man
You have busted up my one of my legs pretty good and now you viciously attack the other leg slamming it hard against the turnbuckle… CRACK… Everyone hears my leg bone crack… I am begging you to stop… I am crying and now whimpering like a little girl as you savagely break my legs…
Kad Royce
Your wrists are broken; your legs are broken. Your mind I think is also totally annihilated and I’m not talking about the way I tried to destroy your ass. I look at you and suddenly I understand that you have paid the debt you owed me. I am facing the crowd which is a bit shocked but at the same time excited to see me so violent.
My work is finished here. My revenge is complete. I look at you pitifully and bring my face closer to yours "A word and I think I can help you... If you don’t say it, I can ruthlessly finish my work of destruction”.
Jake the Man
Laying on the canvas physically destroyed, moaning softly in pain as well as shame and humiliation… You bring your face close to mine and for the first time I think I see pity in them… What a reversal… You pity me !!!! I look at you and then say “I am sorry for all the pain and suffering I caused you over the years… Please forgive me … You are the better man”…
Kad Royce
You are breaking all my certainties. I thought you were a monster and that’s why I was hoping to reduce you to nothing. But now that it is done, now that I have achieved my goal, I am starting to ask myself questions.
I thought you were a monster; I thought you were trash. But am I better than you? Didn’t I hurt you as much, or even more than everything you did to me? I approach you and say softly so that no one hears him 'Forgive me!'
Jake the Man
At first I am not sure I heard you correctly , your soft voice saying “Forgive me “ puzzles me because I am the one who has hurt you so deeply and needs your forgiveness… Could it be that we need to forgive each other to move forward with our lives ? I am in so much physical pain right now I’m not sure what to think…
Kad Royce
I look at you one last time. There is no longer any trace of hatred, no trace of resentment against you. It’s rather me that I want. I put you through worse than what I experienced. I was your torturer and I blame myself. I come to you and help you straighten under the stunned gaze of the audience. I tell you "Forgive me. The ambulance will arrive soon, don’t worry." And I get up to prepare to leave the ring.
Jake the Man
As you start to get up and leave the ring I slam my forearm up between your legs smashing into your big low hanging balls… I watch as you crumble down onto the canvas… You are laying there in agony covering your balls from further abuse…
By name the paramedics have arrived with a stretcher and they move quickly. To get me on it… I look over at you as they start to carry me out…
”This ain’t over you fucking loser “ ……they carry me to the waiting ambulance ………..the end or is it ?
THE END
Published: 2026-03-21, viewed 111 times.

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2026-03-22 11:11Genius. Simply genius! Few guys can craft a story like Kad. The dide just continues to write incredible stories full of details and a plot line but then you toss in Jake— another great guy, friend and writer —and this story becomes a classic. Old wounds, new wounds too in fact are revealed and inflicted.
Both guys showed their fighting and writing skills.
Excellent stuff both of you— but Kad you continue to blow me away with your stories and skills. Kind of in awe!
Kad Royce
2026-03-22 12:23(In reply to this)
Wow... thank you for those words, really. I’m not sure I deserve that much praise. I don’t feel like I have a particular talent—I’m just trying to tell something that makes me vibrate in the moment.
If stories work, it’s mainly because we come across the right partner in person. When the other pushes you, surprises you, forces you to react, everything becomes more alive, more natural. That’s what creates good stories, not some personal magic.
So thank you for the compliment, but a large part goes to Jake... and to this dynamic that transforms a simple idea into something bigger.
I’m just happy to be part of the journey.
Price
2026-03-22 13:31(In reply to this)
Trust me. I know Jake’s talents are huge too.
Dream Breaker
2026-03-22 07:12My good olf friend Jake perhaps learned his lesson here: Bullying isn't worth it; sooner or later, it comes back to haunt you. Just as we've just seen. Time will tell if Jake tries to set up a rematch and beat Kad. Sometimes it makes sense to just leave things as they are. Great fight, gentlemen.
Kad Royce
2026-03-22 12:24(In reply to this)
Thank you for your message, really. I greatly respect the way you analyze things and the way you always manage to put the right words on a scene or a dynamic. You have this ability to take a step back, to see beyond simple exchange, and it always gives a particular depth to what you write.
I take your remarks as a compliment, but also as a reminder: we all try to tell something, to create tension, a story... and it’s all the more pleasant when someone like you follows this with so much attention and kindness.
Thank you for your look, it matters more than you think.
Gregoryfight
2026-03-21 15:55superbe combat Kad ..superbe ... bestial et presque résiliant
Kad Royce
2026-03-22 12:25(In reply to this)
Merci beaucoup, vraiment. Ce que tu dis est exactement ce que j’essayais de transmettre.
Et venant de toi, ce compliment a encore plus de poids.