Brutal Brawls
Established: 2021-01-19
Chat room: #BB
- Extreme violence
- Blood
- Broken bones
- Death
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DREAM BREAKER:
That huge cock fucking me like so many times before. Max on top of me, his fingers in my mouth, like a hook in a fish's mouth, bending my head back, as if about to suck my exposed neck. It sounds like a normal Saturday night at our house, but this night was far from normal. We weren't alone. A little man had come to our apartment to entertain us, to offer us wild, intense erotic moments, but something went differently than I had expected. As crazy as it sounds, Max was forced to fuck me.
As I tilt my head back, the little man step closer and smiles in a strange, maniacal way, rises his hand in the air, and punches me precisely below my Adam's apple, crushing my windpipe with a single blow.
The taste of blood in my mouth, my narrow windpipe filling with blood, and my breathing getting cut off instantly. My body shakes under Max as life escapes me. The last image stored in my retina is Max's face, that apologetic expression and his tear-filled eyes. Then I close mine...
SIMPLY JOBBER:
I have always been in awe of that hot Marine they call Max and I always wanted the chance to spend a night with him - letting him do whatever he wants with me, fight me, break me, fuck me, I wouldn't mind. He was one of the best guys in the fight and fuck community. Everyone was talked about him, how hot he was, how strong he was, how kind he was. Well. That last part. Maybe I should tell you about that part no one knows, or very few. Idols are not always what they seem.
discovered that the day I was attacked by this psychopath - I was being slowly dismantled when The Marine, who calls himself the BitchMaker walks in, pretending to save me, only to have his own ass owned. So much for my strong idol coming to save me. And that only filled me with rage and anger. I was determined to get back my revenge, make him pay and in the worse possible way. But I am a jobber; how can I face a giant like him and win?
I would use blackmail - the best weapon against a big guy like him - and make him do the job for me. He will break on his own. I found out about his hot boyfriend and thought I would strike where he is the most vulnerable - his heart. The Marine is said to do whatever it takes for his friends, his closest friends, and mostly for those he loves. That is the key - Dream Breaker. With him out of the picture, Max would be an easy target.
I started tailing, stalking Alex for some time and found out their routine - every Saturday night, they prefer staying at home, fool around, fuck around and then sleep together. Sometimes with some hot 'random' stud who would serve as their entertainment. I would be exactly that, their little show. I am sure Max does not remember me, and when he does, it will be too late. This is my moment to strike.
I follow this big hot muscular bodybuilder Alex to the club where he usually looks for other hot studs to join in the fun. Unable, admittedly, to take my eyes off his beautiful tight ass in those jeans of his, I tail him like a little puppy, mesmerized. 'Soon. He will be mine.' I think to myself, as I walk up to the bar, and order two drinks - one for me, and one for him that I ask the bartender to send to him on the other side. I smile as he is handed the 'drink'.
DREAM BREAKER:
Damn, the bar is completely packed, as was to be expected on a Saturday night. Max is still out on a mission, but he'll be home soon, so I might as well have a few drinks and get into the mood. It's going to be a hot Saturday night, as it always is here. I lean against the bar when a short man with a pretty good body steps up next to me. He flirts openly and rubs his body against mine, clearly aiming to arouse something in me. And fuck, he succeeds, because something starts to move and swell in the bulge of my jeans.
Hey, I'm not carved from wood or hewn from stone, and the little man's flirting and cooing is starting to pay off, so we decide to sit down at a table. The little guy even offers us drinks, eventually sitting down next to me at the table.
His hand slides up my knee under the table, arousing my little Alex to full glory, trying to pierce the fabric of my jeans. Fuck, he's making me horny, my head is almost humming. I want to fuck him right here, right now. What is strange is that a single drink gets me this drunk, or am I just too horny? I want more than just a quick wank under the table. I want to fuck his tight ass together with Max. Maybe a spit roast? It looks like it's time. Finally I suggest we go back to my place, and it's no surprise that the cute guy, who calls himself SJ accepts my suggestion without hesitation.
The trip home doesn't take long, as we live in the same neighborhood. To my disappointment, I notice that Max hasn't arrived yet, but as I guessed, SJ isn't busy, so I might get to test the little guy before Max arrives. I feel a slight dizziness intensifying and take a few unsteady steps to wash my face with cold water and pour us some more drinks as we begin to undress.
SIMPLY JOBBER:
We are back at your place, the very setting I always wished to be in, where I would finally get payback for what that marine did to me when he let me get totally destroyed, broken and raped by that black brute. Oh, that day was hell for me. And the months after were not so easy for me, recovering, and physio, and rehabilitation. My life was a nightmare, and time to show him what I lived through.
As you pull your tight shirt off to feel more relaxed and cool off, I decide to strike. I rush at you, lift a foot and kick you in the exposed sight with your arms up, landing my foot at your lat. Fuck, those ribs and the muscles around them look hot. I succeed and as you drop your arms, still trapped in your shirt that you are having a hard time peeling off you, I connect a hook from the other side to your jaw, snapping your head to one side.
DREAM BREAKER:
Sharp pain hit my lats sending my back few steps. I have no idea first what the fuck just happened as I am stuck with the tight t-shirt. I try to rip it off but hey, it´s not easy to a man of my size to get out of it. Another impact makes my stumble back, my head humming mor than before when I understand it must be my little guest who has gone mad. Eventually the fabric of my shirt gives up and I am able to free my arms and face. "What the fuck was that? Don´t tell me you are into rougher play?", I try to find some logical reason.
Filling my lungs with air I straighten my back, "Very well then, let´s play rough". I shake my head trying to get rid of those fucking stars in my head.
"He is stronger than I thought", I say to myself as I lunge forward, wrap my arms around your narrow waist and lift you up from the ground just to throw you back to the floor again. "Remember little fellow, you asked for this". I jump on top of you pinning you down with my heavy body as I hit my forehead into your face.
"Damn your skull is hard!", the force of the impact is enough to make myself more dizzy.
SIMPLY JOBBER:
As you pull back, I slug you in the jaw. You are not expecting it so my hit lands well and with good effect, forcing you off me. As you get up and try to side step, I interlace my legs with yours and make you fall down face flat on the ground. "I am here to exert revenge. Its payback for what your fucking boyfriend did to me." I lock your legs and bend them backwards towards your back. I am smaller, but I have learned. I practiced, trained and now I am back to dish out pain. "Where is he by the way?"
DREAM BREAKER:
I am not sure I really understand what you are saying. I struggle in your hold knowing I should easily break free of it as soon I manage to shake these annoying stars out of my head. "Max? You know Max? Payback? What the fuck are you talking about? What ever he did, you probably deserved it." I try to reach your legs with my arms and roll on to my side. "So all that flirting in the bar? Just fake? YOU FUCKER, I WILL PUNISH YOU FOR THIS!". I struggle harder as I see you are losing your hold of my legs. "He will be soon here so run boy, run while you still have legs".
MUSCLE MARINE:
I am on my way back from a mission - successfully accomplished - heading down to the local bar to meet Alex for our usual Saturday get together. Gonna make sure to give him a recount of my trip, blow by blow. Hehehe... But when I get to the club, I do not find him there. I ask around and finally, the bartender, a friend of ours tells me he came by, waited, met a hot little boy and left with him, not sure where to.
'The fuck? He couldn't wait for me? He left? With someone? Already replacing me?' Countless thoughts run through my mind and I am inexplicably and very fast filled with rage, jealousy, and I feel betrayed. My best friend suddenly drops me for someone else... and a smaller guy apparently. The hot chick serving in the bar comes up to me, cups my bulge and tries to chat with me. I brush her hand violently, and push her, storming out. Heading back to Alex's flat, my only thought now is how I am going to find him with another guy, all cozy and enjoying himself. I am going to break him... them, both.
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SIMPLY JOBBER:
"Run? I am not going anywhere. I want him here." I let go of your leg and drop to one side, but lift my foot and slam it into your bulge before you got time to slide away. As you drop again on your knees, groaning, I reach down, under you, and snap a tight grab of your bulge. "I want him to come here, and find me turning you into a whimpering bitch, better than he ever could." I smile as you look at me, wincing as I pull off my shirt. "I will no longer be a jobber."
DREAM BREAKER:
"Big talks from a small guy! The only one you will find here as a whimpering bitch are yourself. You were born to be a bitch." I hook my free leg and aim it hard into your chest sending you down on your back to the floor as I slowly get up, rubbing my aching balls and pulling down my jeans. "And don´t worry, Max will be here and let me tell you, that is not something you want to see." As I see you down on your knees I shove another kick into your guts. "Let´s test your bitch skills!". I reach your waist and pull down your jeans.
SIMPLY JOBBER:
I try to grab the waistband as you pull it down while I am in pain from your kick to my stomach. I reach to one side with my free hand, and grab you at your knee, trying to dig my fingers in the cap to bring you down. "You are the bitch. His bitch, right? You are one to talk."
DREAM BREAKER:
I feel more and more dazed. It can´t be just your blows since I am used to receiving much harder impacts than these. "Bitch? That word describes you the best, slut!" Due my dazed state, I don't feel too much of the pain you are trying to cause to my kneecap but finally land down sitting on my ass. I snap a tight grab of your waist and lift you up while still sitting on the floor. "Time to have the ride of your life," I chuckle as I place your tiny body sitting on my lap. My hard cock slides easily between your ass cheeks, and with a bit of rough thrust, I am able to shove my cock inside your ass. You are sitting on my thick cock, face-to-face with me as I thrust it deeper. "Ride that and show me who is the bitch here."
SIMPLY JOBBER:
I smile widely. "Yes Alex. That's it, fuck me like you mean it." My tone and words suddenly change but you are too dazed to understand what is happening yet. I clench my ass around your cock as it enters slowly, splitting me wide open one little inch at a time. I grab onto your traps now, steadying my descent. "You are gonna show me what a real alpha you are? Fuck me hard? Better than Max ever did?" I suddenly push your torso back, slamming you flat on the floor, and drop myself completely onto your cock as it enters balls deep into me. I squeeze my hole and it is like a tight ring around your base. "You ready Dream Breaker? That is your alias, right?"
DREAM BREAKER:
I hear you calling me Dream Breaker, I hear you comparing me to Max, you are talking about alphas but I'm far too dazed to deal with all those words. All I can understand is my cock drilling deeper and deeper into your body as you move up and down along my shaft. I try to move my hips but it´s quite useless since you are doing the job, nailing my ass against the floor. My hands tightening around your waist harder and harder the closer to the edge you are driving me. I close my eyes and hit the back of my skull against the floor feeling your tight ring wrapping around the base of my cock while your inner walls are enveloping around my shaft. "TAKE THIS BITCH!!", I scream as I erupt somewhere deep inside of your tiny body that keeps riding my throbbing, cum shooting geysir.
SIMPLY JOBBER:
"Yes. Load number 1 is already out. Wow. That was fast. You're a premie, Alex?" I laugh not stopping my ride on your cock, keeping it hard from the stimulation of my ass' friction along the shaft. I look down and smile at you. "How about another one. Ready?" But before you can answer, I start to bounce again with a slow steady rhythm, driving you further down the rabbit hole. "You ever been power-bottomed, big guy?"
DREAM BREAKER:
I smile and laugh nervously as I try to pull my cock out. Your outer ring is squeezing the base of my cock tight as your inner walls envelope around my cock sucking it deeper, making a wavy movements along it. My cock gets rock hard again, eager to drill deeper inside you. "I knew you are a bitch but never thought you are that horny", I chuckle feeling you ride faster and faster like some fucking rodeo cowboy.
SIMPLY JOBBER:
"Me? Horny? Who is the one getting hard here?" As I ride you, up and down, my cock still in a semi-hard state. I bend over you, and place my hands on your pecs, pinning you down. I massage them roughly, turning you on more as I feel your cock wet, or wetter inside me, leaking. "You have no control over your orgasm, stud?" I laugh, mockingly. "Or is it the alcohol?"
DREAM BREAKER:
My head is buzzing and the room is spinning around me as I feel your hand squeezing my pecs, my nipples hardening. "Alcohol? I only had one drink, it can't be...", while somewhere inside me I understand what has happened... "Fuck, have you poisoned me?". My balls rise heavily to the top of my sack, pressed tightly against my body, as I feel that familiar sensation. An electric wave sweeps through my body as your tight tunnel works my throbbing cock. My head swings wildly from side to side in desperate agony as I feel my hot, thick cum rushing into you. You laugh mockingly. "What's happening to me?"
SIMPLY JOBBER:
"What's happening to you? Hahahahaha. You are just experiencing what is normal for a hot muscle stud like you - pure euphoria. You cannot control your orgasms." As I massage your shaft inside me more. I pull up and flex over you. My cock is starting to get hard, throbbing parallel to your chest. I grab it and stroke it. "I just gave you enough in your drink to stimulate you, nothing toxic, just a little dose of libido enhancer. Your senses are heightened, multiplied. And you cannot think straight anymore. Hahahaha. Pun intended." I grab your head and bring it to my growing cock, shoving it in your mouth. "I am going to show you that there is another way of winning a fight, even for a jobber, as you like to call me."
DREAM BREAKER:
"WHAT THE FUC..MMMMMHHH", your surprisingly big cock cuts my sentence, entering deep into the end of my mouth. The inner walls of your ass live their own autonomous life, like some fucking motorized fleshlight, skillfully sucking my throbbing cock, loosening its head and tightening its base and vice versa, forcing the sperm out of my cum tanks systematically. I scream against your cock, my body trembling beneath you as I spray my load again deep inside you.
SIMPLY JOBBER:
Another load out of your cock into my ass and suddenly, I lift myself off you, releasing your exhausted self as I watch you slump down to the ground. "All you alphas think the only way to destroy your opponents are to beat them up. You call yourselves heels... Pffffff." I spin around, straddle your head, placing my balls over your face smothering you and suffocating you while I slam punch after punch into your gut that is now tender, giving my fists better drive into your softened abs. "Where is your fucking friend when we need him...?" As I punch away, I notice your cock stirring again, lifting up...
DREAM BREAKER:
I don´t know what you have done to me. My strengths are vanishing, and my focus to fight back, to stop you is badly distracted when your fists are raining into my abs. My body struggles like hell as I inhale your ball musk and try to make you fall down. "HE IS COMING AND YOU WILL REGRET ALL THIS", I scream when I notice something more alarming: MY COCK IS STEEL HARD, swinging in the air between my legs as if asking for more. "WHAT THE FUCK IS GOING ON HERE?"
SIMPLY JOBBER:
"Hahahahahaha." As I rub my balls on your face and you open your mouth to talk more, I push them in it. "Suck on these, for now." As I reach down and grab your cock, stroking it ever so slowly, inch by inch, knowing the stimulation is too great for you. I bend down more, and sticking out my tongue, I flick it to the head of your mushroom knob and watch your whole body quiver and tense.
MUSCLE MARINE:
Making my way out of the bar, and down the street, heading to your apartment, I can feel the fire of anger building inside me. I feel betrayed. I am not only going to destroy the guy you replaced me with, but I will make sure you regret this decision and wish you never were born to even take it. I feel the blood rush in my veins, making them pump. My muscles tense... I pull out my phone and try calling you again and again, only to have it go to voice mail where I hear your voice saying you are busy now. "Of course you are." I say under my breath.
DREAM BREAKER:
"STOP FUCKING HELL. STOP! I CAN´T DO IT AGAIN", I scream from the bottom of my lungs as I feel your tongue riding my shaft up and down, following each one of my bulging veins on my shaft, rubbing the sensitive V-cut and that throbbing cum vein just below it. My screams die into whimpering cry while you continue controlling my throbbing cock that is ready to shoot again, erupt my seed out of my churning balls once more. "What is it you want?", my cracked voice asks when my body arcs and I shoot yet another load, much smaller than before that hits the air and finally lands on my chest and abs.
SIMPLY JOBBER:
"Count them with me big guy? How many so far? Four? Five?" I laugh as I let go of your cock, watching it throb, shake and explode alone. "Let's go for another round. What I want? To dry you out." I chuckle more as I pull my balls out of your mouth, letting you breathe. I get up, stand over you and kick you in the side, at your ribs, maybe cracking a couple.
DREAM BREAKER:
My body jolts violently due your kicks, weakening me even more. "But how the hell is this even possible? A small jobber guy is dominating me, and I can't even slow him down." I cough up bloody phlegm as my ribs pierce my internal organs, maybe even my lungs, while my traitorous cock remains erect like a marble obelisk. "You got what you wanted, leave me alone!"
SIMPLY JOBBER:
"What I wanted? Nah. Haven't even gotten close. I want the big guy, the Muscle Marine. He will pay dearly." I grab you by your hair and try to pull you up. With your weakened state, you are almost like dead-weight, making it hard for me to lift you, even to put you on a nearby couch. I manage, after some struggles, to pull you up and slam you over the arm-rest of the large couch, making your body arch, your ass pulling up in the air, exposed. I give it a good slap, and make it red, making also your body jump. I grab your legs and spread them wide open, exposing not only your ass, but your hanging balls through them.
DREAM BREAKER:
The familiar smell of the sofa fabric against my face brings back memories of how we usually spend our Saturday evenings with Max, face against the sofa and butt in the air. But now it's something completely different. I don't believe for a moment that SJ wants to fuck me gently; he has something else entirely in mind. I'm too weak to even kick him backwards when I feel his breath on my buttocks, his thick cock and heavy balls hanging between my legs.
SIMPLY JOBBER:
I make my dick swing from one cheek to the other. But I don't want to fuck you yet. I squat a bit, and slide my hand under your legs and cup your balls, massaging them brutally as I see your cock-head leak on the couch's side. "Let's see if those balls still have anything to give." I punch your balls in my hand with my other fist and make you scream. Then grab your cock and tug on it, pulling, like I am milking a cow. I feel your body shake and quiver, but nothing comes out - barely a tiny drop or two, miserable, weak. I laugh as I tug on your balls to send more pain through you. "You are fucking milked dry. Let's hope that asshole of a bitchmaker is better."
DREAM BREAKER:
I cry against the leather cover of the sofa, feeling how my body has stopped fighting back, accepting being controlled by a smaller guy. Trembling and shaking, I feel how you take my swollen balls into your palm, knowing perfectly this is far from being over. And I am right. Your small but strong fists are landing on my trapped balls, almost making them rupture. I scream against the fabric of sofa when your other hand keeps on milking my throbbing cock, making me cum again. But this time there are nor orgasm, not that strong wave that carries me in the air.. all there is ... is PAIN and HUMILIATION.
SIMPLY JOBBER:
"Pathetic. Big guy like you claims he is an alpha. His powers only coming from these." As I squeeze your balls more in one hand. I pull back my other hand, and slam your ass with it. Using two fingers, I shove them into your now exposed and open ass hole. "Lets make sure you got no more juice in you to fight back or even remember what is happening to you." As I shove my index and middle fingers in your and hook them inside you towards your balls, instantly finding your sweet spot, making you leak a large gob. "There is it. That last load."
DREAM BREAKER:
I don't know where I get the strength to scream at the top of my lungs when I feel your fingers pushing into my soft spot, sending thousands of volts of electricity through my body. It takes away all my ability to control myself, my cock stiffens, arches as you force the last drops of semen out of my balls. The feeling is not pleasant, it's like my balls are being crushed, they burn with pain, but I don't feel anything coming out of my cock until a small pop at the tip of my cock tells me that the air bubble of cum has burst. Right then, on the precise moment, I hear the key in the main door.. "MAX!", but it´s too late when the blissful sleep does its job and I sink unconscious against the couch.
SIMPLY JOBBER:
"MAX?" I pull my fingers out of your ass as I feel your whole body tense for a second and then slump, all limp on the side arm-rest of the couch. I pass my fingers under my nose, smelling the sweet scent of your broken ass and smile as I rush towards the door, and hide behind it opening. The sound of heavy boots confirm it is him, your Muscle Marine guy, the guy I have been waiting for. Time for payback.
MUSCLE MARINE:
I slide the key into the door of the apartment, but it doesn't open right away and that only gets me angrier. "Trying to keep me out, you fucking twat?" As the key clicks into place and it finally turns, I smile an evil grin as I swing the door open. "Am gonna fucking destroy you." I barge in, and in a couple of steps, I am in the middle of the large open space of the loft. I look around and spot you on the couch. "WHAT THE FUCK?" I see your ass pointing up, unnatural, never seen you like this. But I also see some bruises on your side, dark welts on your ribs... "ALEX? WHO THE..."
SIMPLY JOBBER:
I watch as you enter, letting the door shut behind you alone, as you walk to the center of the room and see what is lying on the couch... the unconscious body of your friend, as I step stealthily behind you, and swing a weight plate I found lying around. I hit the back of your knees hard, sending you crashing down. "Welcome home soldier. Been expecting you."
MUSCLE MARINE:
I scream loud dropping to my knees, and see flashing white from the pain. "What the...?" I try to twist and turn to see who is behind me, but I feel another hit snap my head back, making me look straight at the idle body of my hot boyfriend hunched over the arm of the chair. 'What the fuck happened here? He betrays me. And gets his ass owned?' I am still not focusing well, until I hear your footsteps come round and you face me, while I slump back, my ass on my feet.
SIMPLY JOBBER:
"Remember me Marine? Remember the guy you swore to protect and just left to die at the hands of a mercenary rogue soldier? What kind of man are you?" As I walk around you, and stand to face you on your knees. I lift a foot and slam it to your chest, sending you on your back, to the floor. "This is revenge now."
MUSCLE MARINE:
I look up and see you, that smile... I recognize the face. "W...W... WH..." I am at a loss for words, tongue-tied. Its like I have seen a dead man again. "But you..."
SIMPLY JOBBER:
"I what? I am supposed to be dead? So you think." I pull back, jump and roundhouse kick you in the head, using the fact that you are still in pain and recovering while making conversation with me, letting me talk. "He broke me. Left me to die. But fate had it differently for me." I start screaming, angry. "I am going to make you pay."
MUSCLE MARINE:
As I hit the floor, I try to roll away. I know this apartment well, I know the space. I need to take control again of the situation. I need to know what happened to Alex. How did this little prick do it? Thoughts rush through my mind. I suddenly realise, I am not tied, I am not crippled... Its just the thought that are making my whole body tense. I flip onto my feet and turn to you. "Come on then. Show me. You have just made the biggest mistake of your life, or should I say New Life."
SIMPLY JOBBER:
"I have learned a lot." As I rush at you, and see you smile. You always loved your opponents giving in to you and attacking straight on. But at the last second, I throw myself, slide in between your wide open bent legs, and strike a nice hard uppercut into your bulge as I pass under. "Even alphas fall sometimes." as I hear you grunt and moan.
MUSCLE MARINE:
I see stars now, taken by surprise with that bulge strike that sends a jolt through me, crippling me. My muscles tense, my body stops moving, paralyzed for what feels like an eternity. "The fuck is happening?" It is true that in my angry state, I don't think straight, can't connect the dots right. And my moves are weaker. But it seems you know how to take advantage of this. Moreover, the image of Alex bunched up on the couch like that makes me worried. He is barely breathing, barely moving... "Is he...?" Is all I manage to say as my thoughts come out as words, unintentionally.
SIMPLY JOBBER:
"Not yet, anyway. Hahahahahaha. He will survive, if you comply." I laugh as I position myself behind you, lift my legs and wrap them around your neck. Your crotch still on fire - you are torn between saving your neck, and putting out the pain in your balls. I snap my legs shut. "I have been training. Feel the power I got now in my legs." As I flex my thighs around your windpipe.
SIMPLY JOBBER:
I have mixed feeling all of a sudden, while choking you. Should I put you out like this? Or make you suffer more? Then suddenly see one of your hands pull off my calf you were trying to squeeze and your arm drop to one side.
MUSCLE MARINE:
In no time, I am losing my breath, you squeezing my neck. I try to dig my fingers into what seems to be one of the hardest calves I have ever felt. My mind is reeling. Taken down so quickly by a smaller bitch. How? My arm drops, releasing your leg, and I hear you laugh. The world around me is starting to turn black, darkness at the corner of my eyes. This cannot be happening...
SIMPLY JOBBER:
I stop squeezing all of a sudden when I hear your partner, Alex, on the couch, moan and groan, waking up and coming around. Getting off you, I take advantage of your weakened state to jump and land a hard elbow to your nape. "This should keep you down a couple of minutes." And to make sure you stay down, I repeat the attack, sending a jolt through your spine.
MUSCLE MARINE:
Out of nowhere, I feel you release your hold, only to have it replaced by two elbow strikes to my nape, that force me down to my knees coughing and moaning the pain I feel coursing down my back. For a second I think to my self I might be paralyzed when I feel my legs give in. But then, that is not possible with this smaller jobber, is it? I hear Alex moaning into the couch, and I understand why you let me go...
DREAM BREAKER:
For a moment I don´t understand what is going on, as all I see is the cover of the sofa. I fill my lungs with air as I hear the familiar voice behind me. MAX!. I lift my head up from the sofa and turn to look back, seeing Max on his knees, fighting to stay conscious, looking at me with his dark eyes like asking what the fuck has happened. I try to get up but still too drugged, too dazed; I collapse back on the sofa again.
SIMPLY JOBBER:
In a split second, I am on top of Alex again. Clapping your ears, and keeping my hands at your cheeks and temple, I press a bit, making you lose consciousness again, almost as fast as the first time. I pull off him, grab his legs and spread them wide open. I reach in and under him, grab his cock and pull it backwards and show you how he is leaking, although he is out cold. I laugh and turn back to you. "Time for round 2, I believe. Let's take this chapter of our story up a notch." I rush at you as you are your knees, and I clothesline you in the chest, pushing and forcing you backwards until you lose balance and drop on your behind on the floor.
MUSCLE MARINE:
You leave none of us both a chance to breathe and understand what is happening as I watch you ring Alex and send him back into his coma state on the couch. You toy with him like he is a doll. And then, rush back at me to force me onto my back. I scream and grit my teeth. Once on my back, I try to roll, but its seems you are waiting for exactly that when I see you pull back and wait, positioning yourself behind me. I feel weird when you start firing punches at my back... not randomly... but very precise shots - to my ribs, my kidneys, my blades... finishing at my lower-back when I feel something kind of click, and then my lower limbs become soft. I am not paralyzed, but they feel numb. "How? Why? Argghhhhhhhh."
SIMPLY JOBBER:
"Because payback is the best feeling ever. Knowing you put the cocky guy who was supposed to help you but rather fed you to the wolves, back in his place." I grab something metallic from a nearby table and hand-cuff your wrists together at your back, making sure your killer arms are useless. Although I see you try to get back on your feet, I know that your legs are still wobbly and you might not be able to stand just yet. I laugh and help you up, making you stand first. I reach around, and smack your bulge which apparently is getting hard in your army pants. "You are just as horny as your friend there. And you think with this brain, instead of the one God gave you up there." I smack your balls again, making you wince, and then scream loudly.
MUSCLE MARINE:
I, at this moment, cannot think straight. The only thought on my mind is how I need to free my hands and fight back before this guy, who doesn't resemble the only one I knew, ends me. I feel you grab my trapped arms and help my up to my feet and start dragging me, against my will, to where Alex is. I can't even hear you talk or rant.
SIMPLY JOBBER:
I pull and push you around. And with every slight resistance, I ball up my fist and slam it to your gut, unexpectedly. Sometimes I land with a loud thud, and with the next one, I land on them less flexed and dig my fist in. Finally, I decide to put you out cold too, and so, I spin around and position myself behind you. Clapping your ears hard, I ring you, and then with two fingers on each hand, I snap claw at that artery on your neck, cutting the air flow to your lungs. Soon, that brain of yours will not have enough oxygen, and will shut down, momentarily, just long enough for me to go on with my plans.
MUSCLE MARINE:
The world goes dark again, being manhandled by this little somebody. I am usually the one dishing out the punishment and yet, this time I am taking it, as you drag me towards Alex before ringing me and making me collapse onto my knees again. I hear you laugh, talking something about your plans.
SIMPLY JOBBER:
I didn't think that you going unconscious would also mean you become dead weight. I laugh at myself for the miscalculation. But I have not been training for nothing, and my revenge will go back as planned. Dragging your limp soft body now towards the couch, I lift you up, slowly, but with great effort, and throw you first face down over Alex's back. This is the most fun part, as I go around the apartment looking for something I need to complete my plot.
SIMPLY JOBBER:
You will wake up to a surprise. I find a roll of duct tape in a drawer close to the other side of the couch. I walk back up to you two, and pulling the Marine off Alex, I lay him on my chest, and start unzipping his pants and pulling them down, stripping him. His cock, that I have seen before, spring out. It is huge, and thick - the perfect illegal killing fireless weapon. But then again, who said it is fireless. Haha. I grab it as it pop out of the briefs and slaps you in the gut. I push it slowly down, aiming it at the ass hole of the bodybuilder laid on top of the couch's arm rest. In that position, it is easier to penetrate leaving no obstacles, and no resistance. But your cock is still soft, and already that big. I laugh as I start pushing your cock-head into the hole, sliding my hand along with it, to stuff it in nicely. I simply force Muscle Marine's cock into Alex's hole, still in its soft limp state.
SIMPLY JOBBER:
And to make sure you will not be going anywhere once you both wake up, I use the duct tape to strap each of your thighs together. This will make sure also your cock remains inside your friend's ass.
I take a seat on a single armchair opposite the large couch where I have now two muscle guys taped together, one of them having his cock deep inside the other, but still in its soft state. 'Time for the show to begin." As Alex stirs back to life now.
DREAM BREAKER:
Once again, when I regain consciousness, it takes me a moment to realize what is going on. I feel Max's breath on my neck and his muscular body on my back; he's not just on top of me, he's inside me! Reality hits me with full force as I see from the corner of my eye you standing behind us, a wicked sadistic look on your face. "This can't be real! SJ should, by all logic, be lying on the ground, gasping for breath or, more likely, dead."
In a panic, I try to push Max off me to get up when I realize that we are tightly bound together and you take a step closer to our completely defenseless, attached bodies. My muscles contract and expand to their limits as I pump them with all my strength, but the strong duct tape won't give way. In fact my struggle only makes the situation worse as my panicking body causes my narrow canal to involuntarily pump Max's cock inside me, turning it quickly into a fast-growing, steel-hard rod deep inside me that is thrusting all the way to my guts. That feeling would drive me crazy in other circumstances, but now it makes me moan in pain and collapse back down onto the couch. "You filthy sadistic psychopath! Let us go now!"
MUSCLE MARINE:
I feel a huge mass under me move, and then tense. My mind is still reeling, seeing stars as I start to come around. And suddenly feel something tightening around my shaft - not sure where it is lodged, but I can feel warmth around it. I feel myself rising and then slump back down over the guy under me. I have a feeling my cock is deep inside him and what I am feeling is his ass squeezing around it... That idea jolts me up, as I instantly straighten up, also realizing I am stuck to this man... Alex. "What the...?" I look down and see my thighs taped to yours, forcing me to remain inside you.
SIMPLY JOBBER:
I stand right next to the Muscle Marine when he comes back to his senses, shocked. Laughing, I smack his back with an open palm, making him cough. "That's right marine, you are stuck to him, your cock lodged deep inside. I run my hand at your ass and rub gently, knowing it turns you on, knowing that deep inside Alex, your cock is not only growing hard, but also doing some serious damage needing space to harden, and grow. It pushes forcefully against the insides of his guts, and soon, it wakes him up also with a jolt. It is like he is being ripped on the inside. You two might have been fuck buddies, but never this way, never so sudden and forced. I run a finger along your ass crack and push it in, invading your exposed ass, without permission. I get closer and whisper in your ear: "You two are mine. I will make you pay dearly for what you have done to me."
DREAM BREAKER:
I hear SJ's words, but I have no idea what he's talking about. The only thing I can understand is that we have to get out of here, and fast, but that doesn't seem very easy thing to do, not at the moment, and the time is running out. Max is moaning against my back, not his usual moans but more like in pain, and in pleasure too. Something difficult to explain. His cock is throbbing deep inside me with the rhythm of his accelerated heartbeat pushing me closer to my edge as his thick veiny shaft is grinding against my sweet spot, making my own cock stiffening again. I squiirm and writhe under Max, praying a miracle happens that gets us some way out of here.
SIMPLY JOBBER:
I can see the pain on Alex's face as you are forced to fuck him against your will and his. Your cock is growing inside him and I can now see the dent it is forming under him, in his gut, as I squat a bit, but I can also imagine what his ass' involuntary spasms are doing to you, stimulating you to the extreme. "Yeah. Fuck him. Breed him." I can see now the look in your eyes, understanding what actually happened, and that Alex did not betray you as I heard you say when you were walking in.
MUSCLE MARINE:
I look at you, quizzically, not sure if I understand what you mean. Although deep down I am sure. I try to pull back, but it only pulls Alex along with me. "You are gonna regret this, you little twerp." But deep down, I feel like I am going to lose something; Things are not looking good for me, nor for Alex. I try to reach out to grab you. I just need to grab you by the nape...
DREAM BREAKER:
There´s nothing I can do to help us, I am blocked under Max´s heavy muscles and tied tightly with him. I manage to turn my face just enough to see Max is trying to reach that small guy. If he only could snap a tight grab of that thin nape, he could break it easily and fast, killing that evil small guy with just one twist. "MAX ,THAT´S IT.. TRY HARDER, YOU CAN DO IT", I almost scream with my last strengths.
I try to help Max get closer to SJ's neck by adjusting my elbow against the sofa and using my forearms to lift our bodies upward. I manage to lift Max and my intertwined bodies a few inches, hoping that it will be enough, but as I do so, Max's cock cuts deeper, making me scream in pain and collapse back onto the sofa. I look back, hoping with all my heart that my efforts were enough.
SIMPLY JOBBER:
As MM tries to reach out for my neck, I take a step back, instinctively. I see you pushing and trying to help him reach me. I grab his hand, interlace my fingers with his and lock them tight. I twist and bend his fingers backwards, breaking two of them. I love the way he screams at his unexpected predicament.
MUSCLE MARINE:
My fingers are locked one second and although I try to pull and tug, I feel this little twerp bend them back and snap two or three of my fingers. I scream, in pain, panting. As he releases my hand, it drops to my side. I pull it up and feel them cracked. "The fuck have you done?"
SIMPLY JOBBER:
"What I should have done ages ago." I spin and place myself behind you both, and start firing fists into Muscle Marine’s back, inching my way slowly towards his lower back, where it hurst the most. My punches, as a boxer, hold a lot of power, and they land with precision, especially with him in a tight trapped position.
MUSCLE MARINE:
I feel my whole body shake with every shot I receive. My whole body shakes, making my cock move brutally inside of Alexs ass, causing more damage as I now smell blood drip down his thighs and mine. But I am also betrayed because it seems my cocl loves this treatment and is starting to leak deep inside you and the head flares. I am close. I moan and groan. "Fuck. No. Not this... not now..."
SIMPLY JOBBER:
"What is the matter Muscle Marine? Close to cum? Already?" I mock you. Still standing behind you, I open my arms wide and clap you, but being shorter than you, I can barely land a precise hit, and my palms strike you at the temple, under your ears. It is hard enough to make you dizzy as I watch you slump over Alex, but not out completely.
MUSCLE MARINE:
I feel nauseous now, but also being pushed over the edge as I land down over Alex and my body starts to spasm. I start pumping my hot thick massive load deep inside Alex's gut. I have not cum in days, saving it for a special night... and here I was being forced to release it all in one go. I scream and spring up as I feel my body tense. As I shake, so does Alex, impaled on my length that lifts him off the couch.
SIMPLY JOBBER:
'What a sight to behold' I think to myself as I walk around and just watch. I see how Alex is also squirming in pain as he is lifted up. His cock now over the arm-rest of the couch, all wet and spewing precum. I smile and approach him. I grab his cock and stroke it. I can feel him close as he moans when I touch it and shakes more. The cock trembles in my hand and I know he is about to shoot. "Cum for me, you filthy bitch."
DREAM BREAKER:
My balls were milked dry brutally just 30 minutes ago, but some strange way you manage to make me leak again. Max's cock is still erupting deep inside me, his cum mixed with my blood, lubricating his involuntary moves that are grinding my prostate, pushing me over the edge any moment. I struggle, or should I say, I try to struggle but it´s all futile. SJ is smirking next to me, watching how my body arches under Max, as I prepare to release whatever might come out of my dick.
SIMPLY JOBBER:
I stand in front of Alex now, as Muscle Marine pulls him off the couch and turns to face me. I hold Alex's face tight in my hands. "Remember when, Muscle Marine, when you asked me what is the best way to kill a man? The quickest and most guaranteed way to do it?" I see the fear creep on Alex's face as I stare into his eyes. I smile at him.
MUSCLE MARINE:
My body is still shaking from my hips-shattering orgasm. And the pain in my fingers is starting to travel up my arm, making it spasm and shake. But what makes me even more tense and alert is what you just said. That question. So unexpected, so not from a guy like you... "How? Who are you? What changed you?" My thoughts are all mangled up together.
I am unable to think straight as I feel pain and pleasure at the same time - pain from my hand, and pleasure from Alex's ass milking me now again as he is getting closer to explode. Its a fucking vicious circle.
DREAM BREAKER:
My eyes widen with fear and panic when I hear SJ's words, "The fastest way to kill?". Max's cock throbs inside me again as my bleeding walls wrap around it involuntarily, my own cock threateningly throbbing between my legs . I can't understand myself, "How the fuck can make me horny?" SJ looks satisfied, and there´s nothing I can do to stop him from his perverse intentions. "Max, don't give up," I cry desperately as I feel my cum vein expanding. "Is this how it all ends?"
SIMPLY JOBBER:
"Yeah Max. Don’t give up." I mock you both as I come closer to you two, grab Muscle Marine’s hand with the broken fingers, lift it up and place it on my shoulder. "Come on. Grab me with your broken fingers." Reminding him how I snapped them. I step back a bit, making his arm taught. I grab his hand at my shoulder, making sure it doesn’t move, and with the other hand - he didn’t see me grabbing that same weight plate from before - I slam the metal disc into his elbow from under, snapping it clean, rendering his upper limb useless. I love the sound of his cries and screams of pain.
MUSCLE MARINE:
I barely understand what is happening, being shaken by the orgasm I am having and doesn’t seem to be subsiding. My huge cock now floating in my cum deep inside Alex's ass is so sensitive, the slightest movement is keeping it hard and stimulated. I moan as I feel this little runt, who seems to have completely transformed into a monster - still small and lean but a fucking sadist - grab my arm, lift it to his shoulder all the while mocking me and my best-friend. I watch him smile as he slams my arm with a plate and snaps it at the elbow. My howls fill the room instantly.
The next thing I know, my mouth is being shut with duct tape as he spins it around my head. He mocks me and tells me to breathe from my nose. My eyes go wide. I cannot believe what is happening. It cannot end like this, can it?
DREAM BREAKER:
Max’s agonized stifled screams under the duck tape tell me something is not as I hoped as his body thrashes on top of me. Out of the corner of my eye, I can see the heavy weight plate tearing into Max’s flesh, killing our last chance to survive, to turn the tables. Max’s gaze meets mine. His desperate expression confirms my worst fears: Max failed to stop SJ; we are at his mercy. Maybe he’ll change his mind… maybe he just wanted to teach us a lesson… to scare us.
SIMPLY JOBBER:
I walk around Muscle Marine to the other side, grab his good arm and swing it around Alex's torso. I make him pull the bodybuilder up to his chest. Using the duct-tape, I wrap that arm to the chest it is holding, passing it around to Max's back, securing the two assholes together. One pulling the other up and back, exposing his gut. "You two always wished you were one, right?" And before you can react to my silly snide comment, I ball up a fist and slug you in the gut you are barely able to flex from the pain, the lingering effect of thelast orgasm and Muscle Marine’s cock moving deep inside you. I pummel your gut hard almost making you puke.
DREAM BREAKER:
I would fold if I only could but we are tied even tighter against us. I turn my face to SJ as he is approaching me, spit on him. " You little pathetic faggot. What ever you have against Max can´t be that important you want to kill us. Let us go. You already proved your point", I try to make you to come to your senses.
SIMPLY JOBBER:
"You just read my mind. With pleasure. Any last words?" I smile as I flex my smaller but lean and ripped tight body. I take a stance in front of you.
DREAM BREAKER:
My eyes widen as I see you are not going to have any mercy. "SJ, or what ever your name is. I am sure we can find some solution to all this. Save our lives, please". You have that maniac look on your face as you grab my head tilting it back. "Please, man.."
SIMPLY JOBBER:
I let go of your head, I duck slightly and then jump, aiming an uppercut to your jaw. I cut your words short, snapping your jaw tight together, and your head back towards Muscle Marine’s face. Your neck now exposed, I smile. I land on my two feet spread wide. I pull my arm back and launch a punch, aimed with precision to your Adam’s apple. There is a loud sickening crack heard in the apartment and right after a gush of blood from your mouth. I side step, grab the duct tape on Muscle Marine’s mouth and rip it off in one swift motion - I want to hear what he has to say as his eyes widen in horror.
DREAM BREAKER:
Although you are quite small man, your experienced boxing blows have a crushing, deadly force. SJ does not hesitate. His quick and accurate strike hits exactly where he wanted it to. A loud cracking sound and the sharp pain are telling me that my Adam's apple has been broken, crushed, destroyed, as it sinks into my windpipe, immediately filling it with blood. My cock sprays the last remnants of semen into the air as I begin to choke on my own blood, my body convulsing as if in a seizure. Then I calm down, my mind settles, and...
MUSCLE MARINE:
"NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO" As you peel, viciously, the duct tape off my mouth, my eyes wide. I am shaking all over, trying to break free although I cannot. I don't even realize that my cock is doing even more damage to Alex on the inside. But what does it matter; I have just seen him shake, convulse and drop dead right under me, still hanging, impaled on my cock and tied to me. He cannot go far, since we are taped together. "THE FUCK HAVE YOU DONE?"
SIMPLY JOBBER:
"What I've been wanting to do forever. Payback is a bitch. And you are one too." As I grab a pair of scissors from the table in the middle of the room, and walk up to you. I cut the strips of tape binding you to Alex's now dead body and make you stumble back and fall on the ground, exhausted. I give you no time to recover or rest and I jump on you, pinning you down and straddling your chest. I reach back and grab your balls, pushing your massive wet and softening cock out of the way. I massage them roughly. "They feel empty. Hahahahaha." Mocking you.
MUSCLE MARINE:
The whole world spins around me as I feel myself pulling away from the dead man on the couch... my best-friend. I am in shock, catatonic, unable to talk. I see my cock plop out of Alex's ass, and notice how badly damaged and bleeding it is. I fall onto my back and in a split second, you are on top of me, pinning me down. I have no time to adjust, that I feel my balls being grabbed tight and roughly manhandled. I feel a knot in my throat, and I am unable to swallow well, let alone breathe. I groan and moan. 'You have completely destroyed me.' I think to myself. My legs twitch and buck, kick up but nothing to talk about.
SIMPLY JOBBER:
I spin around on top of you, but make sure you are still trapped under me and pinned to the floor. Placing my ass on your face, I make you breathe in deep - since you have no other choice, while I keep fondling brutally your balls. I slap your cock and it instantly gets hard again, rising, throbbing, and leaking. I grab it with my other hand and stroke it very, very gently, knowing it will drive you crazy, against your will. And soon, your cock is hard as steel pipe in my hand, and leaking pre-cum again.
MUSCLE MARINE:
Everything goes dark as your ass lands on my face. I cough and choke but that doesn't stop you. You rather laugh, and it makes your ass vibrate on my mouth and nose. I have no choice but to endure and breathe in your musky scent. And to make things worse, your tight grip on my cock gets me hard, and leaking. And that gentle stroking... "FUUUUUUUUCK." I scream into your ass.
SIMPLY JOBBER:
"Hahahahahahahaha. That feels incredible." I shout to you as I feel a tingling vibration in my hole. I love it and push my ass lower onto your face. I keep stroking you and it doesn't take long to make you shoot a heavy and massive load again. But only two shots, and the rest comes out dribbling, a bit like you are getting dry, or empty. "What's the matter Muscle Marine? Not man enough anymore? No more testosterone? Where is that famous manly load you are so arrogant about?" I laugh as I reach out my hand, and push two fingers into the wide stretched hole of the dead corpse hanging over the arm-rest of the couch, and scoop part of your load from it. "Hahahahaha. There it is. Wasted on someone else."
MUSCLE MARINE:
I groan soon, very soon, and against my will, they turn into moans, as if I am enjoying it. My cock throbs and it explodes again. Only this time, nothing comes out but a little dribble with a trace of blood, and sharp pain that courses through my whole body making me buck wildly, enough to throw you off me. I writhe on the floor, trying to curl up in a fetus position...
SIMPLY JOBBER:
I grab your head and pull it up a bit, bringing my scooping hand with your own cum from Alex's ass to your mouth. "Taste this. It's good." All the while mocking you. I use some to smear your hot ripped abs, wetting them, making them shine. And out of nowhere, try a punch into that famous hard gut, only to feel it softened. "What happened here? Not so tough anymore? Or is it the famous Muscle Marine cum that is making it weak?" Grabbing you by your neck, I spin you, and drag you to the side of the couch, sitting you up, your arms limp and weak at your sides, that chest heaving and exposed.
MUSCLE MARINE:
You have finally come to your senses, stopping the erotic torture, as you sit me up close to the couch. I slump back and lean at it. "Please. No more." I manage, trying to negotiate with you. I breathe heavily, raggedy, from the pain and the remaining spasms coursing through me. I look up as I see you smiling and flexing your smaller body, proud of yourself.
SIMPLY JOBBER:
Before you are able to even start negotiating, I squat in front of you, getting closer, and connect a swift hard brutal hook to your chest, my fist connecting straight to your solar plexus, cutting your breath instantly - enough to make you choke, and your eyes bulge out. "You feel that? The end nearing?" I laugh as I know that is not enough to kill you. One shot does not put you out so fast. I grab you now by your throat and lift you up. You are heavy and I am struggling, but still manage to pull you enough to sit you on the couch now, next to your dead boyfriend's body.
I look at you and smile. And then at Alex, grab his head and in one swift motion, viciously twist it until his face is pointing towards us. "Let him watch. Hahahahahaha." There is a loud crack in the process and I see your whole body jerk and quiver. I grab your legs and snap them shut, forcing your thighs together, trapping that massive cock and balls in them. And I straddle your lap, to make sure they remain shut, and in a very uncomfortable position. I keep smiling at you, that evil smile that makes shivers run down your spine. "Ready?" I ask, knowing the answer.
MUSCLE MARINE:
Of course I am not ready. Exhausted, spent, on the edge. All I am now thinking of is to actually beg you to kill me. But I don't think I need to do that anymore. It is coming. I know it is as I see you straddle me, blocking me. I try to look to one side, but I see the dead eyes of Alex looking at me. I swallow hard and look to the other side. I have failed him...
SIMPLY JOBBER:
"Yes, you failed him." I express what you were thinking like I could read your mind. But as you look at me in shock, eyes wide at what I just said, I slam a hard punch to your left pec - a brutal heart-punch. I watch your larger body buck, shake and then tremble. I punch again, and this time I hear you groan and choke on something, before spitting out a gob of blood. I punch again and this time it is clear, something popped inside and your lungs are filling with blood. I punch one last time and twist my fist in the pec, grinding it against your still faintly beating heart. It is over. You are dying, while I feel a stir in my pants.
I fish out my cock and let it rest on your bruised abs. I grab it with one hand and stroke it as my other hand still balled in a fist slams at your chest again, and again, and again, relentlessly, making sure you are done. As I hear you take your last breath, I moan and start shooting my load all over your cum gutters. "I did it. I am done here. Revenge is sweet." I start laughing maniacally.
MUSCLE MARINE:
The laugh continues, deafening the whole apartment... and it grows louder, shaking the whole room.
******
DREAM BREAKER:
I wake up in a jolt, damp with sweat. "Fuck what a nightmare", I say to myself. We fell asleep last night after a too heavy dinner. The TV is still turned on. I am just about to get out of the bed to prepare some coffee when I see on TV a guy who looks like SJ, looking back, threatening expression on his face. "What the fuck is this?". I shake Max to wake him up.. "Max,wake up.. do you know that guy?"
MUSCLE MARINE:
I wake up slowly... "What is it Alex? What's wrong?" As I get up, rubbing my eyes. I notice you drenched in sweat, and panting. "You alright?" But as you point to the TV, I turn and gasp. "DA FUCK? THAT IS SJ." I feel a stir in my pajama pants. Been a while I haven't met that young tight ass. 'But what is going on here?' I think to myself. "You alright? You look like you have seen a ghost or something."
DREAM BREAKER:
"Max, who is this guy? I had this crazy nightmare and he was in it. He wasn´t very nice with us. My heart is still bouncing. He had us trapped in our own home.. he was aggressive and violent and you know what he did to us ...", my words are cut when your phone is ringing.. "Who is it?"
MUSCLE MARINE:
"Just a guy I met a long time ago..." My phone pings and I grab it from the night-stand next to me. As I unlock my phone, I drop onto the bed, in shock, gasping.
DREAM BREAKER:
"What is it? You turned all pale.. " I rush to the other side of the bed and grab Max by his shoulder. "Talk to me Max!"
MUSCLE MARINE:
I lift the phone, turn it towards you showing you a gif with no sound: SJ holding the head of a friend of ours, after twisting it and killing him. He points at the camera, at us, and says "You are next."
Standing in the gym's matted back-room, holding the head of this stupid boxer wannabe, I smiled at the camera of my phone after snapping his head.
My fists, trained for years to deliver only the best fatal shots, were all bloody now. And after hitting that send button, I looked at the profile picture of the receiver on the screen and smiled while I wiped the blood off my knuckles onto my shorts.
It has begun - my quest to make them pay. ALL. OF. THEM.
Published: 2026-03-15, viewed 120 times.

Gregoryfight
2026-04-04 12:07superbe histoire .... WOUAHHHHH
SweatAlpha aka AlphaEd
2026-03-18 17:49Oh Muscle Marine and Dream/Alex yet again you have written a scenario of extraordinary force and so well defined and described. Then SJ! Wow the action and words of a wronged guy who in the process of revenge has become I think in spite of his true self a psycho monster. I won’t spoil the end for others but I hoped it was so and yet even when I read the end I had by then been sucked into the horror an degradation of this saga. So well done again all three of you-proud of yoru abilities to once again draw us in . am still in shock and yet also roused by this as I always am with you two and now with you three’s talents and more! I hug the three of you in awe!
Dream Breaker
2026-03-18 17:52(In reply to this)
Oh Ed, Thank you so much for your kindest words that encourage us to write different scenes and stories. Big hug to you !
SweatAlpha aka AlphaEd
2026-03-18 17:54(In reply to this)
Dream/Alex
It is not only always a pleasure but an honour my friend
bikerbull
2026-03-17 21:37This story is honestly such a wild, dark ride! I love how it flips the script—having a "jobber" absolutely dismantle two massive alphas is a genius, creative twist that keeps you on the edge of your seat. The vibe is incredibly gritty and intense, blending psychological horror with raw, visceral action in a way that feels totally fresh and unapologetic. That "it was all a dream... or was it?" ending is a total masterstroke. WELL DONE GUYS!
It’s dark, it's twisted, Top tier.
Dream Breaker
2026-03-17 21:43(In reply to this)
Thank you for your kind words. They mean a lot, especially coming from you. They encourage us to try something new again... maybe SJ will visit you... soon... hahaha
Jake the Man
2026-03-17 20:35WOW , this story pulled me in quickly and held me tight ……..the growing tension , the brutality , the power of revenge …..all calculated to add an air of suspense and drama . The suspenseful ending leads us to want more ………. The creativity of the writers is amazing ! Congratulations on a well crafted story !!!
Dream Breaker
2026-03-17 21:44(In reply to this)
Thank you for your consistently heartwarming words. You know that it’s your words that encourage us to keep on writing.
Dan Freyr-Sullivan
2026-03-17 19:43HOLY FUCK!!! What an incredible amazin story! As the late Thelma Ritter said in the classic movie All About Eve..what a story! Everything but the bloodhounds nippin at their rear ends!
Guys!!! This has it all...mystery, murder, intrigue, horror, surprises and a quest for revenge too? Does it get ANY BETTER than this?
The short answer: NO!!!
The long answer: HELL FUCKIN NO IT DONT GET NO BETTER THAN THIS!!!
Great story and thank you for posting!!!
Dream Breaker
2026-03-17 21:46(In reply to this)
Thank you Mr. Freyr. You know it means a lot to hear your friendly and encouraging words. Happy to hear you like the strory.
THE STEPHEN
2026-03-16 10:09Thriller? Nightmare? Horror story? Don't know, but liked it.
Dream Breaker
2026-03-17 21:46(In reply to this)
Dear Stephen, So happy to hear you liked our story! Thank you for your comments
BraveAjay
2026-03-16 08:29नमस्ते - Namaste, what seemed like a gruesome, violent massacre turned out to be a nightmare—or perhaps not a nightmare at all, but a foreshadowing of things to come. A brilliant play on a plot that unfolded on multiple levels simultaneously. I’m stunned. Thank you for sharing your story on THE SHELTER
Dream Breaker
2026-03-17 21:47(In reply to this)
Buddy, thank you once again. Always love to hear your comments.
Freaker
2026-03-16 07:48It is a dark story mixing revenge, violence, psychological domination, and a prophetic nightmare. What begins as an apparently erotic and intense encounter gradually transforms into a disturbing revenge narrative where power, manipulation, and cruelty dominate the story. The tension steadily increases as the characters become trapped in a situation they cannot control, creating a strong sense of claustrophobia and helplessness. The psychological aspect of the revenge is just as important as the physical brutality, making the antagonist feel calculated and frightening. The final twist, revealing that the whole sequence may have been a nightmare but could also be a warning of real danger, gives the story a chilling and memorable ending. Overall, it works as a dark and provocative thriller blending erotic tension with horror and revenge . Thank you for sharing in THE HIGH TABLE
Max Freaker
Dream Breaker
2026-03-17 21:48(In reply to this)
Thank you Freaker. You know both of us more than well and that´s why it is specially heartwarming to hear your friendly words. BIG HUG